| "Holding On" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 23:41 EST
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Son-kun, give me your faith so I can believe in miracles again... Krillin, I need your confidence as a reminder that when we're together, we can do anything... Piccolo, share your knowledge and experience with me, and help me to see all the possibilities... Tien, send me your courage which never falters, even if the enemy we face seems invincible... Yamcha, lend me your ability to overcome and adapt to any situation I find myself in... Vegeta, you gave me our son; now I need your stamina and perseverance so I can protect him... This.. this was so beautiful. I actually sniffed our some. You really outdid yourself here. Oh, I wish we could see some more marai stories out there in the fanfiction. Everything is so tragic and sad.. ah. |
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 16:29 EDT
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Lik it very much. OMG, imaging Vegeta figuring out that Gohan slept with Bulma several times, even if he were dead. He would kill him.. no question about it. :P
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 23:04 EST
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I love this fic and so I had to re-read to see how you tweaked it for the better. It's great! I'm a sucker for Mirai Bulma and you land feet first on all her emotional repetoire here. Beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Evil Child On: April 03, 2003 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this was such a good story ^^; so cute... I liked it a lot- sorry that I don't really have anything else to add ^^;;;
- EC-Chan |
Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 00:10 EST
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This is such a great story! It's so emotional and beautiful! You've really outdone yourself with this fic! |
Reviewed By: Mia On: January 21, 2003 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so awesome. Bulma and Gohan are one of my favorite characters and you put them together. What a wild, cool story. |
Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 On: January 20, 2003 08:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I've been called the B/V queen, because I love that couple so much...but you made me wish it were different with this fic. It was wonderful...and I cried. Good job...as always. |
Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 00:10 EST
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oh man!! GREAT on shot there!! i all most cried. it was sad and sweet at the same time.
thanks for the good read! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 01:29 EST
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Wow, that was sad, beautiful, a whole roller coaster of emotion. I loved it. Don't know what else to say. |
Reviewed By: Burned Vamp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 23:43 EST
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Burned: Ugh! Knock it off before I tell your dad you shagged his woman!
Gohan: I didn't go NEAR P!
Burned; NOT P! *points at Bulma*
Gohan: O.o!! It wasn't me!!! It was MIRAI Gohan! MIRAI!! Not me!
Burned: Oh, so Mirai is the lusty one, ne?
Gohan: No wait...
Burned: Can it, it won't work for Trunks, it won't work for you!
Trunks: Can I come out of my corner now?
B/G: NO.
You know I think this is beautiful, right?
*GRIN* |
Reviewed By: Burned Vamp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 23:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FIRST REVIEWER!!! NYAAAAA!!!!
Honestly, P, I think it's the most beautiful piece you've done so far, but I haven't read your inuyasha ficcies yet. But I love this.... Gawd, you made me cry!!!
That one paragraph with comparing all of her friends to Gohan... just *starts sniffling* makes my *starts bawling* heart *starts blubbering* BREAK!! *BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!*
Gohan: *smirks* She just thinks I'm too lusty!
Burned: *growls and smacks him* Knock it off!! Be serious, this was beautiful!
Gohan: Of course *smirks*
Burned: >. |
Reviewed By: Will & Grace & Jack & Karen On: January 21, 2003 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Gohan and Bulma! Bulma loves Saijyan men, doesn't she? |
