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| "High School Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Mistress by the Arts On: January 26, 2003 21:10 CST
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neato ficcie! write more please? want to know what happens | Reviewed By: Cat On: January 25, 2003 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thai is a great story. Hope you continue soon. I will make sure to checkit soon. Good Luck. Cat | Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 06:52 CST
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This is great. I hope you update it again soon, as I would really like to know what is gonna happen next. YAYAYAYAYAY. 2X1 rocks, ne? You writing is excellent, Keep up the good work. Ja ne | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 20, 2003 02:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOhhhhh,.....hurry-up with the next chapter please,.....LLLLooooveeee this,...
and what's with poor quatra in a pink apron,...that is SSooooooooo FFuunyyyy,...*LOL*....now he looks even Moooorreeee like a "girly man" than before,.....*giggles*...keep-up the good work kay,...till yer-next chapter,..JJJaaaaaa and GGaaanbbbbateee-Neeeee!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll explain the ratings now. I like your style of writing; it's amusing. There were quite a few spelling and grammar errors. If you don't have a beta, I'm offering my services. Email's on my user page. If you do have a beta, I apologize, but he/she/it is lazy. I have yet to read a fic where that particular plot was used, yet the supporting cast might have been a background audio tape from a hundred other fics. Sorry, I think I've read too many bad, bad 3X4 fics. Overall, I enjoyed it. The mistakes and repetitiveness didn't take away from the story too much. I hope you improve with the next chapter, and I recommend that this one go through a little editing. Just a thought.
Jay |
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