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| "In Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was deep and really good. I hope I can write like this someday.
| Reviewed By: cyzay (not signed in) On: August 04, 2005 21:39 CDT
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That... was amazing. it was so exquisitly written, you could just feel what what happenning. i have to admit, i nearly facevaulted in suprise when i found out just which 'Saiya-jin' it actually was. i would had never guessed it to be who it was. a terrific piece. the end is especially beutiful. brava
| Reviewed By: MsTrunksLuva On: June 10, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a 2 day old fanfic lova. I especially luv the one's w/lemon. (yummm) I really enjoyed the story IN DREAMS. The entire plot was about sex, however, it was written well. It had great pace and a surprise ending. Truly Luv'd it.
| Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally got around to reading!!! I'm so happy I did too!
I glanced at the reviews and I must say that I totally agree with fusionHA. She(?) pretty much said everything I could think to. In fact, I don't think there's too much I could elaborate on that she didn't do already, and much better than I, I might add.
You have this posted as a prologue. Does that mean you plan to write more later? If so, you HAVE to let me know as soon as you do!
Hmm...not as crazy as some of my reviews, but I think I got my love of the fic across. See, this is why you shouldn't quit writing. We love your stories! Keep up the awesome work chica! Until the next one, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: xshiny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! KINOMI! lol! i loved it! and thank you so much for letting me use it on my site^.^ it was very sweet! lol and finally the first lemon fic of the two too! so congrats! you should make a sequel... cough cough. hint hint. lol | Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk On: January 22, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, you really did something original. It wa really good too.
cat | Reviewed By: Kia On: January 21, 2003 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmm.....First and foremost, I must say I really enjoyed your PWP. *grins* I like a good lemon, but more than that, I love a lemon with a good rind of plot around it. And yours has both.
The lemon was very, very well done...very sensual, very explicit. But the best part of your fic I think, is the surprise ending. ^___^ I was blown away! | Reviewed By: BVtBear On: January 20, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this stuff was fucking awsome, damn djFusion, she's getting me addicted to your stuff. Hey, anyone out there who doesn't appreciate your writing is a jackass, because it takes a lot to write with THAT talent. You're gifted so keep those stories coming! Wanna give me a shout, you can reach me at BVtBear@aol.com | Reviewed By: fusionHA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok! I read smut.
Yup, there I said it. Mind you I don't intentionally look for it, but I somehow wind up reading alot of it. The PWP field out there has mountains of it - graphic one-shots dripping with sexual content that exist purely to shock the reader. Completely pointless, unrelated sex that doesn't come across as anything but words on the screen and awkward visuals (if any). Through my hunt, I'm now forced to believe that there are only two types of lemons out there among the millions: The good kind and the bad kind. Unfortunately, 99.9% of ALL PWPs are the bad kind: poorly written, too rushed, grossly perdictable, vastly unrealistic/unexciting, and completely dull to the bitter end.
Now on to yours...
O_O
Like I said earlier - HOLY FREAKING SHIT!!! You have blown my concept of the PWP completely out the window and managed to write a story based entirely on the act of sex that has more realisism and emotion than a 20 chaptered romance fic. Not all sex is beautiful, sweet, soft, fluffy, blah... Nope, you destroyed that notion too! This was raw, exciting, rough, and suprisingly verbal with the same intensity. It possesses even qualities that a brilliantly written fic has, but you soaked it to the core in a tub of lemons. I can't begin to tell you how dry my eyes were after reading this from the lack of blinking.
Needless to say, THIS is why I don't write lemons! How could I possibly compete with something like this? ^_^ You've taken a fic that SHOULD have been just a piece of common smut if attempted by any other author, but instead you made this idea into something that only you could do...
TASTEFUL.
No this isn't smut at all... it was incredible.
THANK YOU a million times! I hope I can make you even 1/10 as happy with the Yammar fic I'm writing for you, and I'm in your debt forever!...again. ^_^ |
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