| "In 2 Minds..." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Wait my mistake ur last reviewer
Reviewed By: judgeman On: April 06, 2004 09:25 CDT
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Title: Its me again (ur first reviewer)
Reviewed By: Judgeman On: April 06, 2004 09:24 CDT
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PLease why havent u written more its so good and its been so long PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE I STILL REALY REALY think it would be great if u e-mail me when contineud its the same as the first one so i'll be wait update
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Reviewed By: Judgeman On: January 01, 2004 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! Im terrible at continuing stories that i have to wait for to be updated so can u PLEASE reminde me by emailing me when u update or if u update. my e-mail is showstopper573@yahoo.com please hurry and update i cant stand cliffhangers.
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Reviewed By: Jenna On: October 20, 2003 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, pleez keep the cappys comming
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Title: Interesting developments
Reviewed By: kuroiryu On: September 30, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a interesting, ideal you have put the characters into. While I don't understand Akane's reaction to the news since she never seems to have any interest in Ranma in the first place however it is a good plot twist and worth reading on to see how is is fleshed out. Keep up the good work and i'll look foreward to seeing the next chapter in your series.
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Reviewed By: HigherArchAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 22:13 CDT
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I love the story so far plaz keep going
Its very good |
Reviewed By: Vega Star On: April 19, 2003 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great, all of the charicters are incorperated perfectly, and the dialouge is perfect |
Reviewed By: Kolock On: April 19, 2003 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOU BLASPHEMEMER. A LEMON WITH A PLOT!!!!!
:P
Just Kidding. What looked like a rather simple lemon fic has done a 180 and turned into a emotional angst fic. Good Job. Never saw that coming. The story is coming along rather well.
It is nice change to see a good plot in a lemon type fic.
Well keep up your writing and I look forward to reading more of it. |
Reviewed By: Jeffl On: April 19, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I countinue to engoy this inventive story and look forward to the next installment and hope that there is one. good luck and best whishes to the arthour
ps pardon spelling |
Reviewed By: jeff l On: March 24, 2003 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the concept is great i had the idea myself for a diffrent female personality for ranma but this is great and i hope it continues
when the updates come if it is not to much trouble email me at jkelanahan@yahoo.com please. |
Reviewed By: Meowm_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good idea. I like the idea that Ranma had a new personality. I wonder if he's going to get rid of Reena? Whaat would be good for this might be more lemon scenes ^ ^; (I know it's why NC17 fics are the most visited, and they're hard to write, but, hey!) and maybe more about Akane's relationship with Reena? Will she find out about Reena doing her sister and be mad at her, or will she eventually fall for Reena? This is a cool fic, I hope you continue it soon. |
Reviewed By: fuu1 On: January 22, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... thereīs nothing I dislike yet! and quite a few things that I DO like, characterisation, dialouge etc. etc.
However, since this is advertised as a lemon iīd like to know if itīs gonna be lots of girl/girl stuff with ranma-chan (not really my cup of tea, I donīt hate it but I prefer straight sex-scenes)
Or if itīs going to be (mostly) hetero-sex with maybe the occasional same-sex encounter...? |
Reviewed By: Josh_Temple [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 18:21 CST
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well as lemons go. This Reena thing may have potential. keep it up |
