| "A Life Broken & Incomplete" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: CrescentArcher [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
You really should continue this.
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Reviewed By: yukichan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is quite...unique. I would think that Hiei would be paired up with Hari, but Kurama? And Botan with Hiei? I don't know...My poor Hiei having to deal with all those pathetic ningens...T.T
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Reviewed By: black_rose On: July 16, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jennn On: February 03, 2003 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, great chapter! (Easy on the eyes too, thanks!) I like how you explain what each of them were doing in their apartment. It was very easy to imagine. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Jennn On: February 03, 2003 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, great chapter! (Easy on the eyes too, thanks!) I like how you explain what each of them were doing in their apartment. It was very easy to imagine. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: DA_BOMB_GIRL On: January 29, 2003 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...words can't describe your story's greatness, Please keep writing and updating. |
Reviewed By: The_Almighty_Great_One On: January 29, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work has a style of it's own that atrracts attention and envokes the imagination. Hehe sounded smart didn't I? Anyways your stuff is awsome, keep it up! Can't wait for the rest.
signed,
The Almighty Great One |
Reviewed By: ^.~ On: January 29, 2003 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your story, keep up the great work. Can't wait for the rest. |
Reviewed By: :) On: January 20, 2003 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay! just dropping by to say that you're off to a good beginning, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jennn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the blue words, they're just a little small. Anyway, what a great, great story! You have a wonderful imagination and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the impressive work! |
