| "Camping Trip to Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: tea haters On: October 14, 2003 16:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
kill tea!!! thats all u need to make this a good fic no make that a SUPER DUPER WONDERFUL FICCIE
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Reviewed By: yasha On: October 14, 2003 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohohhohooh can u kill tea of i hate her she is so stupied!!!! i would luv 2 see a yugi/yami that would be so cute i cant wait!
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Reviewed By: celia - chan On: October 09, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wheeeeee!!! ^_______^ i really liked it!!! and the malik, oh the malik... *drool* woah, i really gotta stop doing that!! *whipes up drool* but it was really good!!! keep going! WHEEEE!!!
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Reviewed By: Samantha Fullen On: August 18, 2003 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way to go! could you pair Tea up with someone? Tea rocks (except the friendship rants)!!!!!!!! write more NOW!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: griswald On: June 18, 2003 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hard to read because it was so bunched up.
paragraphs are needed.
you gonna kill them off because you don't like them? |
Reviewed By: u don't wanna noe On: April 19, 2003 06:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOHH!! I see some of my fave pairs being insinuated!! LIKE YAMI/YUGI!! AWWW THEY'RE DA BEST!! Other yami/hikari are good too!! OOH!! Do I see a Mai/Shadi here?? You are creatively sneaky...I like creative sneakyness!! ^__^ Please continue!! Like right now!! |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: April 10, 2003 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going! |
Reviewed By: Goddess sisters On: March 17, 2003 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
LEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMONLEMON!!!!!!!!!PLEASE?!PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE?! |
Reviewed By: lauren On: March 08, 2003 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE ADD MORE IT IS TO FUNNY |
Reviewed By: f12 On: March 03, 2003 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great idea for a fic! I'm reading this from my home in London, so your writing must be international srandard! lemons for next chapter great idea. |
Reviewed By: Riley MAxwell & Rhea Maxwell On: February 20, 2003 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Riley: 1 thing I must say. SET SOMEONE ON FIRE!!
Rhea: Make it that Weevil kid.
Riley: He creeps me out man.
Rhea: With the glasses.
Riley: And the hair.
Rhea: And the voice.
Riley: And the clothes.
*both yami and hikari shiver*
Weevil: I know you love me!
*yami and hikari scream and run far far away.*
Weevil: *sniffs himself* Do I smell?
Riley: BY THE WAY I LIKE YOUR FIC WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: Yugis_April [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 03:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I think its really good. Write more please ^^ |
