"Musings" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: The Dude Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 21:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: The pace for these is very slow, but they are thoughts, that's how its supposed to be. I enjoy the fact that you chose to use the original name for Tenchi's mother. In the original books her name was Kiyone, and not many people use that fact. I enjoyed these fics. It might be interesting to hear from Funaho and Misaki, or maybe even from Kagato or Tsunami.
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Reviewed By: Sailor_Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 17:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought your fic was really good. I loved Ryoko's piece. There's just one thing, Tenchi's mother's name isn't Kiyone, it's Achika.
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Reviewed By: Sailor J-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 15:26 CDT Comment/Review: Beatuful piece of introspective. I love all this. Cant' wait to see Sasami. |