| "The Human Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: why
Reviewed By: darkgunaki On: January 03, 2004 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im sorry, you must exuse the tendancies of my lighter side, for it greatly loathes this story, if my lighter side didnt exist i may have enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall is Average Rating of the other 4 rounded up. Actuall Overall is 8.75
Great Story! I liked it. The only thing you need to work on is spelling of the cannon charecters' names. Other than that it was very enjoyable.
Steve Jester |
Reviewed By: Cracker_15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a rather beautiful story...in a creepy kind of way, but beautiful none the less.
I liked TK's little declaration too. It was very sweet.
~Cracker |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, i agree with ladybird2223 about the names. its till pretty good though. do more. |
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i just have coments on what u called them. You said that Kari's last name was Takemura. It's not. You can call her Yagami or Kamiya. but those are the only two last names that she goes by. Another thing. T.k.'s full name isn't Takeguru, it is Takeru. I'm sorry if i sound mean or something but one of my pet peeves is when the people give false info in their stories, in other words, giving the wrong names.
also in the preludy thingy her name is Yoeli not Yo-lei.
Besides these mistakes in the names, you did a good job. |
