| "Little Slave Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great, as ususal. Arigatou. Hey, I know you said that this isn't the end in chapter 20, but chapter 21 isn't the end is it? What's up with Tel and Yarrah? Rowyn said the night before that Tel wasn't lieing, but then the next day, she has a weird fealing about Tel. And that there's something wrong with Tel and Yarrah. Hmmmmm...curious, curious! Snowblind sounds so Kawaii! I want a wolf, that'd be awsome. Well, update soon okay?
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:12 CDT
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heh, heh. Sorry about that. I didn't see that you had updated. Gomen Nasi.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:09 CDT
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Nani? No update yet? Hehe, I love useing Japaneese, it's fun. Onegai(please) update soon. I need an update, it's not very nice for you to leave us hanging like that. Update!!!!!!!
Ja ne.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 05:22 CDT
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I think they are trying to tell me something...but..WHAT?!
Just kidding! I updated...I know, I know, about time, too!
~Ami aka Skayda |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 10, 2003 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
What the hell's going on????
Where's my update???
You've had plenty of time!!!!!!
I want my update!!!!!
SOON!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!
SOON!!!!
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: June 10, 2003 18:16 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Little mispell. Hehe |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 10, 2003 18:14 CDT
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Hey, What's the hold up????? I need an Update!!! Please.Soon. |
Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: June 10, 2003 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
UDATE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: May 07, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NEED UPDATE!!!! SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: May 07, 2003 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing! All I have to say is: I want more!!! = ) Update soon, please. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: May 07, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great fic!!! Please, please, please, please, please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Bwah, update!! ^^; Hehe, I was reading over it again. Betcha Piccolo's a little sorry he forgot her birthday, since she's gone now, huh? :-D |
Reviewed By: Tyhm On: March 06, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shweet. Want more! Gaaah, if I knew it was unfinished I'da never started...*pouts in suspense* |
Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 23:18 CST
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Write more! Write more write more write more!! It's good! Of course, I may be biased, but still, I think it's great, I can't wait to see what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow another great ep keep up the good work and update as much as you can |
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