| "Little Slave Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: April 21, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Hey, I really like this fic, and I thought you said you were inspired to write this fic again, well I REALLY do like it, you're a great writer, so, please, please, please update soon. Thanks. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: November 09, 2003 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, but, where's the update? It's a really good fic, please continue writing it. I'll be expecting an update soon. Thanks. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 19:04 CDT
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*beams happily* Thank you!
I'm so glad I got inspired to start writing this fic again. It's getting to be really fun again. :)
I am re-reading some of your work as well. I drew and colored a really fast sketch of Piccolo teaching Ryven to fly. I'll give it to you on tuesday if there is a game, k?
And I love plugging your writing! hehe! :)
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 18:33 CDT
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You're welcome! And thanks for plugging my fanfic!! ^^; I don't deserve such kind words. You're awesome ^_^
The fic's getting really good! I can't wait to see what happens next! You did a really good job with the last chapter, Taunts and Tricks, (Or was it Tricks and Taunts? Oh well, I'm too lazy to check ^_~) I could feel the anger and tension when I was reading it. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 12:08 CDT
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Thank you, Vicky! *tries curtsy and falls over*
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 19:24 CDT
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She made them stupid because A) Piccolo's the main character and B) It's funny. And yes, Chi Chi HAS thrown pots, (among other things) at Goku. This is her way of putting Piccolo in the forefront, because Saiyajin's get waaaay too much publicity for basically being dumb meat sheilds. If ya wanted saiyajin intelligence, ya shouldn't have picked a Piccolo Fanfic to read ^_~ No malice was intended in this message. |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: July 09, 2003 16:05 CDT
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WHAT????? This is not fair! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.Baka!
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 24, 2003 23:13 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE |
Reviewed By: DBZ-chi-chi On: June 24, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, kinda boring, AND YOU MADE CHI CHI AND GOKU SOOO STUPID!
1 chi chi isnt that mean, she never threw pots at goku!
2 GOKU ISNT THAT DUMB! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 17, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Arigatou for updating so soon. Keep up the good work, you're a really great writer, update soon again, okay? About the 8 I gave you on spelling and grammar, I found a few small errors, no biggie though. Update soon again, Okay? Thanks again.
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Twisted Angel On: June 17, 2003 17:06 CDT
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You're a great writer, keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane On: June 12, 2003 18:59 CDT
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Yay! Ya updated!! ^_^ Hehehe, actually, Snowblind has his own personality and all, in my fics. He's a bit of a cranky snob, but he "deals with having to live with the bipeds" ^_~ But this works too ^_^
And yet the plot thickens even more! I can't wait to see what's lurking in Tel's mind ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!You finally updated! Hmmmm.....interesting. What's up with Tel and Princess Yarrah? Heh, heh, heh. Evil thought. Lock Yarrah and Vegeta in a room for a week, and let them battle it out. Heh, heh, heh. That'd teach Yarrah. Well, anyways, Arigatou for the update, and update soon again, okay?
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Twisted Angel On: June 12, 2003 13:47 CDT
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Awsome. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: June 12, 2003 13:46 CDT
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Wow, great update, now, update soon again, okay? DOn't keep us hangin' for so long, like last time, okay? |
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