| "Little Slave Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: July 09, 2003 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT????? This is not fair! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! Grrrrrrrrrrrrr.Baka!
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 24, 2003 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE |
Reviewed By: DBZ-chi-chi On: June 24, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, kinda boring, AND YOU MADE CHI CHI AND GOKU SOOO STUPID!
1 chi chi isnt that mean, she never threw pots at goku!
2 GOKU ISNT THAT DUMB! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 17, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Arigatou for updating so soon. Keep up the good work, you're a really great writer, update soon again, okay? About the 8 I gave you on spelling and grammar, I found a few small errors, no biggie though. Update soon again, Okay? Thanks again.
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Twisted Angel On: June 17, 2003 17:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're a great writer, keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryven Sorane On: June 12, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Ya updated!! ^_^ Hehehe, actually, Snowblind has his own personality and all, in my fics. He's a bit of a cranky snob, but he "deals with having to live with the bipeds" ^_~ But this works too ^_^
And yet the plot thickens even more! I can't wait to see what's lurking in Tel's mind ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!You finally updated! Hmmmm.....interesting. What's up with Tel and Princess Yarrah? Heh, heh, heh. Evil thought. Lock Yarrah and Vegeta in a room for a week, and let them battle it out. Heh, heh, heh. That'd teach Yarrah. Well, anyways, Arigatou for the update, and update soon again, okay?
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Twisted Angel On: June 12, 2003 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: June 12, 2003 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, great update, now, update soon again, okay? DOn't keep us hangin' for so long, like last time, okay? |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great, as ususal. Arigatou. Hey, I know you said that this isn't the end in chapter 20, but chapter 21 isn't the end is it? What's up with Tel and Yarrah? Rowyn said the night before that Tel wasn't lieing, but then the next day, she has a weird fealing about Tel. And that there's something wrong with Tel and Yarrah. Hmmmmm...curious, curious! Snowblind sounds so Kawaii! I want a wolf, that'd be awsome. Well, update soon okay?
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:12 CDT
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heh, heh. Sorry about that. I didn't see that you had updated. Gomen Nasi.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nani? No update yet? Hehe, I love useing Japaneese, it's fun. Onegai(please) update soon. I need an update, it's not very nice for you to leave us hanging like that. Update!!!!!!!
Ja ne.
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 05:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think they are trying to tell me something...but..WHAT?!
Just kidding! I updated...I know, I know, about time, too!
~Ami aka Skayda |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 10, 2003 18:20 CDT
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What the hell's going on????
Where's my update???
You've had plenty of time!!!!!!
I want my update!!!!!
SOON!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!
SOON!!!!
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Trunks Lover On: June 10, 2003 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Little mispell. Hehe |
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