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| "Oh, Kami!" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: February 26, 2004 20:35 CST
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HEY! Poor Dende! OH, you story is great, funny, hilarious, and You are fabulous! What more can I say? Adios!
| Reviewed By: One_Winged_Sephygirl On: June 30, 2003 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA! Like what 'punker' said it will bother me, but other than that is was great and funny but a tad different from the In'lar-anth stories, (which i love!) since they're more serious.Plus i haven't seen any other fan-fic writers brought it up. san-kyuu! | Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 19:48 CST
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*cackles and giggles, almost falling off her mushroom cap* That was GREAT!! Although I must admit, I'd have liked to have seen more of that V/G lemon... I have a particular fancy for those..... anyway, you write marvelously! Thanks for the kicks and giggles that brought!! *flutters fairy wings* And I"ll be checking on In'lar-anth probably Daily, so you and Rouge keep writing, got it!! *waves wand menacingly* Love it, and keep it coming!!! *hugs and disappears* | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:45 CST
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LMAO, awwwwwww... poor Dende! Man... now that's going to bother me every time I read "Oh God" or "Oh Kami" in a lemon... *falls out of her chair from laughing too hard* ^_^ Great job! | Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear God lol, that was funny. this is one that I enjoy a lot. Keep up the good work | Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 09:33 CST
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Wow! Poor Dende. That was hilarious. Kind of makes you think before you speak, huh? O_O Anywho, totally enjoyed it! Great Job! | Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 05:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? You blew me away! (Hehe, that ryhmed! and I can't spell!) I'm still giggling, Oh poor Dende! I really feel for him...heh! The sences between Goku and Vegeta,(Makes one conjure up the saying "Hot monkey love", doesn't it?) ;),whoa! And your use of discription...wow...pure poetry! Very creative and a great read! | Reviewed By: Kikoro On: January 20, 2003 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was the funniest thing i have ever read! I have never laughed so hard while reading a fic before. At some parts i actually pointed at the screen and screamed Blasphemy! Trunks and 17, thats just not right (concidering their history) and Yamucha and Bulma, hell no! Blasphemy! LOL I enjoyed it very much, keep the yaoi goodness coming. | Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmuaahahahahahahahahaa, rofl, lol,
poor Dende
rofl, lol, I'm still laughing. That was one hell of a story. What a fun. | Reviewed By: Derr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this! A very original take on some common pairings, along with a very unconventional one. I like especially the way you handled the sex itself. Sometimes, implied activity can be just as erotic, if not more, than explicit sex. Anyway, as far as how supposedly asexual Nameks get it on, might be something best left to the imagination. :)
I recognized the name-in-vain parody right away. One would think that the Guardian du Jour would get pretty steamed abou always hearing his name yelled out at choice moments...
Anyway, it was a fun exploration of hot monkey Saiyan love from a different viewpoint. Thank you! |
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