| "Separation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 08, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far i hope u update soon.
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Reviewed By: Padfoot_Girl54 On: January 05, 2004 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far. it has storng potential. write more soon!
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Reviewed By: goku mum On: January 21, 2003 09:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting beginning, keep on going. But a beta reader would be of your profit to avoid the typos. |
