| "The Boundaries of Parents" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 03:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok... I TOTALLY screwed up on that... I DID love it though. Practically straight 10's is the WAY higher then I have EVER rated on a fic before. It was pretty gripping. I couldn't stop reading. The way you described each moment, never got fake or corny, just PERFECT. You had few or NO mistakes that I could see. Either that or I was so caught up in reading that I missed a TON. No... Just kiding. I really enjoyed how you made it fit together, the entire thing, with the show. Unlike most which stray, yours was perfect with it. hmmm.. Maybe we could send it and have it made into actual episodes! Probably not... because you'd get money for it, and people don't like it when other people get money. I CAN'T wait to read the other story(s) you have written, and I hope they are just as good, even though they'll be better... if that's possible. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not much else I can say but WOW!! I LOVED IT!! |
Reviewed By: nthman On: June 25, 2003 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable, you have talent :) |
Reviewed By: Wraith On: February 01, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why won't you make another fic make one |
Reviewed By: Wraith On: January 30, 2003 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, if your making another fic of boundires of parents then i suggest putting it on media.org. |
Reviewed By: Wraith On: January 29, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm happy to see that your finally making another fic, make it long. |
Reviewed By: ravenwings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Originally, I didn't plan to make a sequel to this story, but if my fans insist, how can I resist?? ;)
I am working on a sequel to "The Boundaries of Parents". Please be patient with me, though, school is in full swing again!
Feel free to keep reviewing or sending me your opinions/requests (you can email me too) for the next story!
~ravenwings |
Reviewed By: Wraith On: January 28, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care if you said your not going to make another fanfic of boundires of parents but PLEASE do PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Wraith On: January 25, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fan fic you should try & make another one where bit and lenna goes out to find van and fiona and where van gets seriously hurt in a battle and is hospitalised for a month but not paralyzed. |
Reviewed By: Kia On: January 22, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cool!! And sad!! Do you like Bit and Leena fics?? If you do it would be cool to make a sequel of Bit and Leena going to find Van and Fiona!! |
Reviewed By: Bangman On: January 21, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome! Im not lying, I had to finish the whole thing, its definately movie material, Ravenwings, uve outdone urself this time!Its a great story, I like the lifetime bounty thing, thats gonna get Bit lots of other adventures u can think off! I wonder what part Raven plays on this...Still, more material for more stories for u to make, U should consider this as a proffesion. |
