| "Unusual Intentions" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good for a first Lemon... ALthough i Like the idea with Kaoru on top, is it possibLe Kenshin didn't even wake up from what she has done? Wow! What a hard sLeeper! But stiLL, i give you a two-thumbs up! Keep up the good work!
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Title: A nice break
Reviewed By: sangohuntress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice break from the usual lemons where Kenshin is the top and Kaoru is the bottom. It's nice to see Kaoru as the pro-active and dominant entity in this relationship for a change. I hope you'll write more like this.
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Reviewed By: DD On: May 29, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I agree with Ravenna 100%
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Reviewed By: Ravenna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 05:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked it. I think you did pretty well for a first lemon. I was fully expecting him to have been awake the whole time. That's the only problem i had with it. I don't think there is any way, with his past, he wouldn't have woken up. But, that's me. ^_^ Good job.
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Reviewed By: Missteya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 10:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummmmm... that was a really good premise,but I think you should work on a few things. There is no need to use som of the ten-dollar words you did. Some of them were used incorrectly actually and i got confused. Read over your fic a couple times before posting it. This usually gets rid of the grammatical errors. Not half-bad for a first try. Kudos to you
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Reviewed By: Relix On: October 13, 2003 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice...good for a first timer, i hope mine will be as good at least.
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Reviewed By: Laurie Hall On: September 05, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was preety good...keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Aki Kamatzuki On: July 31, 2003 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ehehehe...ehehehehe....ehehehehe @___X ::falter fall splat:: Oh my.. that was.. quite interesting... o___O... I thought the battousai of all people would have awaken just from her entrance into his room >_>... ::coughs:: |
Reviewed By: thunder sister On: July 18, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhm, I rated the enjoyment factor 9 'cause, Why? I don't know why. It was kinda wierd considering that Kenshin was still asleep even after the damn thing! And at the end it had a little WAFF. but it was still good. Don't ever change. |
Reviewed By: hostilecrayon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really enjoyed this fic ^^
I find it hard to believe he slept though all that yummy sex XD XD XD just kidding. |
Reviewed By: Reviewer On: June 15, 2003 10:21 CDT
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I like everything about the fic and it's enjoyable to read. By the way, you spelled a name wrong. It's Kaoru. |
Reviewed By: Kayen On: June 08, 2003 17:44 CDT
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Loved your story...but there was no way he could have slept though that lol
I was half expecting him to have been awake the whole time... i liked the way you ended it though! Good story! (: |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 06, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! A little strange that he can sleep throught all that!! But what every works.:) |
Reviewed By: PrincessZelda [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never knew reading sex fics could be so enjoyable............. |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: April 21, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your fick! it was fab! i really love the part when he said 'wake me up s i can be on top' it was so funny! i loved it! i hope to see more like it! |
Reviewed By: Sk8s [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a part 2 isn't at all a bad idea...very great first lemon...i really liked it. |
Reviewed By: ewunia On: February 01, 2003 21:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Write a part two of this story it is good :)) |
Reviewed By: Ewunia On: January 24, 2003 16:38 CST
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Write chapter 2 it is a good fic. Quite different from all other. Write some more. |
