| "My Dark Side" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: DivineAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Sweet and short, I liked it as a one shot becuase it was to the point and effective. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would love to read more. Really. It is so, I don't know how to say it, sweet??? Kawai. That is the word I was looking for. Yes. |
Reviewed By: Raven On: July 26, 2002 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was highly enjoyable. I wasn't expecting it to involve Omi. I thought it was an Aya fic, but it was nicely done. |
Reviewed By: Raven On: July 26, 2002 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was highly enjoyable. I wasn't expecting it to involve Omi. I thought it was an Aya fic, but it was nicely done. |
Reviewed By: Raven On: July 26, 2002 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was highly enjoyable. I wasn't expecting it to involve Omi. I thought it was an Aya fic, but it was nicely done. |
Reviewed By: Thespian Soldier [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I espcially like the way you give us some insite on what Omi's thinking rather then just portraying him as a little kid. People seem to think that he's naive and doesn't understand the real world when in reality he probably understands it more then most others. And nice way of brining up his past, I see a lot of fics that forget that one little detail. All in all it's a very nice fic. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Leila On: June 26, 2002 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooohh. aahhhh. And there's a person that actually makes Omi deep and not just little kiddish. I really like it. It would be good to leave it like this or add more. The riting is good and I like the rational behind Omi's thoughts. |
