| "The Final Crusade" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Interesting...
Reviewed By: Piccolobond [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd like to say I'm a Christian.A Roman Catholic...so I'd have to stay your story was disturbing to say the least.But if you dont want to get into heaven, that's your choice.^_^ Other than that, it was an excellent story, and terrificaly readable.I'm kinda like Radiation Boyy-I tolerated this story enough to see beneath it-and it was excellent.You broke the taboo by writing this involving religion, in a way it would've been simpler and better to base in on something else-but it was still brilliant.Well done.
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Reviewed By: radiation_boyy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 02:01 CST
Comment/Review:
ooh ooh ooh
Forgot to say:You included Egyptian mythology!
That sums you up as a great writer in my books! |
Reviewed By: radiation_boyy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I'm surprised that there is'nt a bunch on of agro bible-humping zealots that have attacked this amazing story!!!.....unless X is one...which proves that maybe religion denys good insults!
You handled him very well...
No really...I'm in school still and I have to make a 9 month project on anything as well as research it...I decided on creating an original manga comic and write the story,illustrate it....blah blah blah.......Anyway...this fic caught my eye because it is very similar to my story!!!!!!!....(minus the Pagan people)....it's very complicated to write out but it's more on the line of a new religion stealing prayers and manifesting into a resource and a ingredient for the "super-gene".........look at my art (plllleeeeaase!)....some of the characters are on there!!!...
To cut to the chase....this is an amazing fan fic because I relate to it so much!!!!!!!!!!....brilliantly written and the story oozes creativity and intelligence!
P.S..I am an "Alternative Christian"...ie.I'm basically a Christian but still have the open-mindedness to accept other religions (except one)....so suck that zealots!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: X On: February 11, 2003 23:07 CST
Comment/Review:
up yours |
Reviewed By: HououKageMusha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you very much. You should pay more attention to the Warning next time. |
