| "Fantasy Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: The Conjugator Says:
Reviewed By: The Conjugator On: June 10, 2005 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really agree that you should work on your spelling and grammar, fanfictions gets outright PAINFUL to read if those two factors are bad. You did get a "2" on your "Spelling & Grammar", but that is only because I've seen worse. I also, like some others think that this should be rated PG at most, and not NC17. The "Enjoyment Factor" would be much higher if your grammar/spelling was correct.
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Title: Jelly
Reviewed By: Jelly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Deborah On: December 29, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...grammar improvement would be a good thing. This was excrutiating for me to read.
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Reviewed By: . On: July 13, 2003 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Take spelling and typing classes.
Become a writer.
Make lots of money.
Get robbed by me.
G.J. |
Reviewed By: P.J. On: March 11, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you need to work on your grammar.. ALOT. Yet I likeed your point of view and how it was based in a totally different time and place. Hentai is something that can't be read by 17 or younger. This was mostly PG. |
Reviewed By: Vivi239 On: February 23, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice work, there should be more fics like this on the net. Please add the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: The Last Face [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 05:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I am you and you are me and me are we and we are all together.
*Smacks analogman*
Fortune cookie say: WORK ON TYPING SKILLS! |
Reviewed By: Artzangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
interseting point of view.. yet your grammer is off, and your story telling reminds me of a old senile woman announcing her past love with her husband was like... in other words very dull and bland. also Im not sure if you know but this fic is rated NC17 which means no one under the age of 17 should be able to read this writing due to graphic content, horrid use of words and etc... when your fiction has all in all none of the above. |
Reviewed By: Vivi239 On: January 28, 2003 22:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Intersting... I like it, please keep it up! |
