| "Dark Kingdom Fanfic: Sweet Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Priestess On: June 27, 2003 02:27 CDT
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Oh man! You are freakin' evil! You have to stop toying with us. You just dangle these scenes in front of us then find some way to snatch it away! And that chapter was too short. I need more! [I whine, but deep down I love the way you play with my emotions ;)]Just pleeeease keep new chapters coming! |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! New chapters! *G*
Me liked a lot :) These were great! ...and as always fully equipped with evil cliffhanger *grrr* ;) ...and damn Jade. *grrr* She's really giving Pyrite a hard time.
Very well done :) |
Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 16:49 CDT
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That was brilliant! I can just picture Rubeus in that dress and it is hilarious. I can't wait for the next installment. |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 11:42 CDT
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WOW!!! YOu've really been pretty fast this time :) ...and still you write as good as always... which is brilliant! I'll never stop loving this story and it's getting better and better with each new chapter! :)
Keep up the good work :) |
Reviewed By: Priestess On: June 06, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Priestess cackles evily) Hehehehehe... Now some mischeif will ensue! I look forward to it. |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 16:17 CDT
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Mediaminer's getting faster, yay! So I'll leave a short review here also: You're work is amazing, keep up the good work :) |
Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade On: May 23, 2003 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! That was so good. I can't believe you left us hanging like that. You must write another chapter soon. By the way you are just too good at this. I am in awe and a little bit jealous.
I was a little worried when Pyrite was tied up and Beruche was in the room. For a second I was afraid she was gonna try something and that would not be good for our heroine. The next part wit hKunzite was so tense and amazing I loved it! Okay and I'm thinking maybe Pyrite is a reincarnation of Zoisite or something along those lines, maybe i'm wrong, just a thought.
Anyway Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 18:47 CDT
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It's getting hot indeed ;) I wonder how Pyrite is going to get out of this one... and I wonder if Kunzite may "suspect" anything about her gender... I mean... they slept in the same bed and it seemed as if he undressed her... btw. this scene in particular was awesome!
Speaking about awesome things: the entire fiction is awesome :) Keep up the good work, I love the story so far :) (and still I wonder what will happen next... *sigh* so I'll just have to wait, ne? ;) *starts waiting* *G* *reads the new chapters again while waiting* ;)) |
Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 00:45 CDT
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Thank you so much for updating. I just loved the new chapters. I can't wait to find out who was behind the dress. And how is Kunzite going to react when he discovers Pyrite is a girl! Oh the possibilities. Keep 'em coming! You Rock! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 04:50 CDT
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Oh that was so good! You are an awesome writer. I can't wait for more. How cool is Kunzite!
Ja ne! The Priestess |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 19:05 CDT
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I enjoyed the new chapters very much :) Excelent work :) I liked the way you wrote Prince Demando and the way Pyrite's reletionship to different peoples are developing. The story is great :) |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 02:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffhanger! This is so unfair! Pyrite just defended herself! Again, I really enjoyed the two new chapters!
And again: can't wait for more ;) |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 16:25 CST
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That was fast... and it's getting more and more interesting... I'm really hooked up... this story is so good... can't wait for more :) |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 16:02 CST
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Oh my, I'm curious as a cat how this will continue :) They're going to the Black Moon... oh the possibilities...
Don't leave me waiting for too long :) |
Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more soon! I love this story! |
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