| "Dark Kingdom Fanfic: Sweet Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Title: wil there be more?
Reviewed By: OniMon On: March 04, 2005 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I have never been one too happy about sailor moon fanfics, but I tried my luck on this one and BOY!! I was far from disappointed, this story have drawn my attention to it every free moment I have had these two days. Seriously I don't think I have read any fics this entertaining, exciting and amusing in my years of reading fanfics. But reaching and reading chap.33, my heart dropped to my stomach, 'is there no more of this story' and 'it's been so long since she/he uploaded chap.33, maybe the story will end here from lack of time/inpiration/pick your choise'. I'd admit I'd be disappointed if this story wasn't finished and in my heart I hope that you'll update and finish this fanfic of yours, since I'd read it eagerly, that's for sure! *smiles*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune1 On: October 11, 2004 13:13 CDT
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Horray! I was afraid you discontinued the story ^^; I'm so glad that you didnt though! As always, very well written and entertaining...I feel so bad for Pyrite, always managing to be on the receiving end of Kunzite's wrath ^__^ Anyway! Please update soon!
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Title: Surprises
Reviewed By: Pyrite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 18:28 CDT
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All right, I need to first off apologize first about the terrible lag between chapters. My job's still murdering me. That's going to end soon, though, when I start my new Costume design business. Next, I want to apologize about the confusing way the story reads. I'm not sure when, but Media Miner has gone through and made all the stories uniform in layout. Pretty as it all is, but it makes my chapters confusing to read without italics or font colours. If it's just too difficult for any of you to read, PLEASE...let me know. I can send you my master chapter files that are MUCH easier to read. Thank you to all of you who had been patient with me all this time. Support and enthousiasm helps my motivation to write faster and sleep less, lol.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune1 On: July 07, 2004 12:35 CDT
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An Update! Huzzah! XD I love this fanfic, the writing style is superb as always and the relationship between Kunzite and Pyrite is getting more heated ^_~ If only you can update sooner...ah well..genius must not be rushed :P Although an idea has been occuring to me. What would happen if Pyrite was transformed into a guy for one day? (Guess the Dark Moon sister's lotion had some kinky side-effects XD I can just imagine how poor Pyrite would react, not to mention Kunzite's reaction as well *lol* Ah well, just a mindless thought ^_^. Please do continue writing!! I'll be very sad if you dont *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: AmbroseWulf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 14:40 CDT
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Thank god someone enjoys the Dark Kingdom as much as I do! Keep writing and update, pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good story. Completely enjoying it, especially Kunzite.
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Reviewed By: duckybee On: May 11, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDDDD LOOOOOOL! THAT WAS SO GREAT XDDDDDDD Poor, poor Pyrite X33333 Cant wait to see what the 'deal' was, and dude, I looove the relationship between Kunzite and pyrite, you pulled that off really well!! It really makes tghe reader want to see more. God, I bet that if Kunzite finds out about Pyrites....'secret' in one of his little assaults..dear gawds XDDD That one scene were he found the bandages around pyrites chest were like "O.O ooooh shiiiiiit.' Cant wait cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Tasha44 On: April 17, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic!!! Please update again soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
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Reviewed By: chibi Girl17 On: March 25, 2004 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!?? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!! I really want to know whats gong to happen!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune1 On: March 20, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've recently stumbled upon this story, and I have to say, this story is absolutely breathtaking. I've read all of your chapters in only two days! It's *that* good (: I especially love the confrontations between Pyrite and Kunzite; a wonderful blend of charm, drama, and humor. I only hope that Pyrite continues her facade as a "boy", I adore the concept, especially when Kunzite's involved ^^. (Some scenes are just begging for me to draw them, I'm just afraid it wont be half as good as in the story ^^;) Ok, enough of my rambling. Please continue! You can definitely count me among your fans *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Kitsune1 On: March 20, 2004 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've recently stumbled upon this story, and I have to say, this story is absolutely breathtaking. I've read all of your chapters in only two days! It's *that* good (: I especially love the confrontations between Pyrite and Kunzite; a wonderful blend of charm, drama, and humor. I only hope that Pyrite continues her facade as a "boy", I adore the concept, especially when Kunzite's involved ^^. (Some scenes are just begging for me to draw them, I'm just afraid it wont be half as good as in the story ^^;) Ok, enough of my rambling. Please continue! You can definitely count me among your fans *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 03:06 CST
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AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! The utter cruelty of the CLIFFHANGER! *GASP* Really though I'm just glad you updated. I really missed this story. And the new chapters all match up to your previous brillance. *BRAVO* I just hope I don't have to wait as long for the next update. *SOB*
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Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 03:06 CST
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AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! The utter cruelty of the CLIFFHANGER! *GASP* Really though I'm just glad you updated. I really missed this story. And the new chapters all match up to your previous brillance. *BRAVO* I juist hope I don't have to wait as long for the next update. *SOB*
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Reviewed By: chibi Girl17 On: March 10, 2004 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I've only read to chapter 5 so far but I'm gong to go back and read the rest I just want to let you know I love it so far! good work!!!
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Title: Continuation!
Reviewed By: Pyrite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 21:36 CST
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Yes...this is a reminder for everyone to know that the story IS still being written. Here is to more chapters being posted!
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Reviewed By: duckybee On: December 05, 2003 10:56 CST
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FWAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE Go on!
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