| "Christmas Surprises" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
yay 2 chapters, They had their babies. I hope Quatre's baby is okay |
Reviewed By: something like human [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is pretty entertaining. just wanted you to know that those twins are huge...most twins don't weigh much more than 6 lbs full term. and if they were premature...they would weigh less. my evil twin and i were only 2 wks early and together weighed 9 lbs. but it's fiction...you can do what you want...i mean, it is two men having babies... |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 07, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE DAMNIT!! OH GOD YOU HAVE TO LET HIM LIVE, YOU CAN'T KILL QUATRE'S BABY OFF I WILL KILL YOU!! PLEASE PLEASE BE MERCIFUL AND LET HIS BABY LIVE!!!!! PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU YOU HAVE TO HAVE MERCY!!! LET HIM LIVE. PLEASE LET HIM LIVE. IF YOU KILLED HIM OFF HE WOULD KILL HIMSELF!! (You can tell I want them to keep this baby can't you?) PLEASE JUST LET HIM LIVE!
On a rather stupid note even though I hate them, the doctors want their expariments to turn out all right. (You can tell I'm eaching for extra reasons here) IF QUATRE KILLS HIMSELF OVER HIS BABY THEN TROWA WILL KILL HIMSELF TOO AND THEN HEERO WILL GO INTO DEPRESSION AND THAT WILL AFFECT DUO! (You can tell I'm over-reacting but hey, it's me and that means I want a happy ending damnit!) THEN IF DUO GETS UPSET HE WON'T PLAY TRICKS ON WUFFIE AND THAT WILL AFFECT HIS LOVERS, THERE'S A WHOLE GODDAMN CHAIN-REACTION THING GOING HERE SO YOU HAVE TO LET THE KID LIVE! LET HIM LIVE DAMNIT OR ELSE!!! (Sorry about all this ranting and raving but hey, it was one hell of a cliffhanger so you should expect me to get upset_
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. I'll hate you if you kill of the baby. And I know this is twice in one day but oh well! |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 07:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Way kawaii story!!!! I loved it's just sooooooooo cute! However I don't trust J and G, there up to something. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*falls off chair paughing*
there is gonna be more of this, right?
That drinking game is so popular in gw fics...I wonder why? lol. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 03, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolute fantastic fic I hope you finish more chapters very soon I cannot wait and I will be looking for your updates.
Love,
Aria |
Reviewed By: ivan.blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
about the rating reasoning... u'll get my personal message *wink* overall this fic is very enjoying and interesting... i can't wait for more..... please update soon ne ^______^ |
Reviewed By: ivan.blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 07:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well.... i love the story goes so far.... but i think it's a bit lack of trowa's and quatre's participation in this fic and also other character as well...it maybe centric on heero and duo but if T&Q and other characters have the same amount or a bit more of participation, it will be so much better.... and i have to admit, it's a good fic... story wise is very interesting and i kind of love the plot.
well....i hope this little comment will help and keep up the work and i can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: ivan.blue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well.... i love the story goes so far.... but i think it's a bit lack of trowa's and quatre's participation in this fic and also other character as well...it maybe centric on heero and duo but if T&Q and other characters have the same amount or a bit more of participation, it will be so much better.... and i have to admit, it's a good fic... story wise is very interesting and i kind of love the plot.
well....i hope this little comment will help and keep up the work work and i can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: January 23, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! I can't believe Relena even tried to marry Heero even if she was Bi. She is such a idiot! Keep this story going I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: mistress by the arts On: January 22, 2003 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry! didn't see this one till i went to your gallery thingy, so i post again, yes? want more please! is cute! |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*can't stop laughing* this is great! i hope you write more soon! i want to see what happens next!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Marie On: February 09, 2003 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I literaly fell of my chair laughing when I read this one, Itīs great! I canīt wait for next chap! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 07, 2003 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi me again! I absolutly love where you are taking this fic. I am worried about one thing though......What are Doctor J and G doing here and why the hell does Quatre's kid have a tail?! The tail thing is a bit weird...but it reminds me of the saiyans in Drangonball Z which is cool. So um...sorry I have really weird thought patterns. Anywho write again soon this is driving me nuts! I must have more! *chibi eyes* Write more soon please!
love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: chaotic kitty On: February 07, 2003 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was majorly enjoyable.....truly loved the first chapter.. SURAN WRAPPED A GUNDUM?!?!?!?!
can't wait for the next chapter. |
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