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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! The aspect of Heero being pregnant is hilarious! I just loved it when he got all emotional and I kinda liked that everyone that they knew was gay and that everyone found it normal, Haruka and Chastity were super cute and Hannan's tail was soo cute! Great story! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Zan On: August 23, 2003 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story seemed to leave a lot to be filled in. I didn't like how the boy's suddenly ended up pregnant without a real explanation. Another thing is that Heero was _very_ out of character with the profanity and such. And to have Trieze and Millie on the floor laughing was a real turn off. I stopped reading after that. Overall, your writing style is pretty decent. I suggest that you be more indept when writing a preggy pilot story. Give the reader some realism. Humor is not always the best route in having a reader thoroughly enjoy your story. |
Reviewed By: milanhino25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started to read this story at fanfiction.net but I kinda lost it in the files so at least I'm finally getting to read it. The tail on quatre's baby and the fainting man was that funny, also Heero yuy the perfect soldier getting pregers I Thought I'd never see the day when that would happen. I hope you read my stories too, and that the sequl will be great. ja ne . |
Reviewed By: Zazies On: February 24, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YAY YAY!! finally finished.
well, u already know what i think *psst* (it's me..courtney!):p
anyway, i wont say much, except, i cant wait for the sequal for more DRAMA! (drama!) DIPERS! (dipers) and....whatever else u got planned. Kutoos to u! WOO! |
Reviewed By: Alia Lowe On: February 22, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This truly has been an amazing story. Lots of laughs. I like the way you didn't bash Relena too much (though I would have loved it either way). Its funny to see Heero and Quatre with moodswings and strange food cravings. Keep writing and I hope to possibly see a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Bomber Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!! That was the most incredible story I have ever read!!!!! *is stunned speechless*
Taka: *grins* yeah, I loved it sooooo much too. It's not very often you get a really good mpreg fic with the g-boys that doesn't skip the whole pregnancy. A lot of it reminded me of 'Father of the Bride 2'. The heat wave and icy cold house. Than Q-man going into a problem labor. Be honest, you planned it this way didn't you? *smiles sweetly* In all cases. I LOVE IT! If you ever make a sequel...or if you have and we just don't know it, let us know ok? Oh! BG also writes fics on fanfiction.net. If you feel like it, take a look. Maybe she'll write a fic for you. But no promises. GREAT FIC!!! |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
OVER?????? NOOOOOOOO!! I love it, well at least there will be a sequel. :P |
Reviewed By: Aria On: February 17, 2003 20:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's Wuffie and his lovers going to say to the babies?! That is going to be fun! Please update again soon, I can't wait!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
yay a new chapter!!! I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
hey, can you tell me where they song came from? Did you make it up. If not, what's it called and where can I find it? Its cute and my cousin is pregs, so I wanna learn it. lol |
Reviewed By: chaotic kitty On: February 14, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks this story is fun to read, i don't get bored with it..my cousin started laughing when I had her read the saran wrap episode... she loved it., good luck with the rest of the story |
Reviewed By: Todesengel On: February 08, 2003 05:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I hope Quatre's baby is okay.
Anyway, it's great fic. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: ShaeLynn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't believe I haven't responded to this yet. I love this fic! I've read it about two or three times so far. What's next? |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
yay 2 chapters, They had their babies. I hope Quatre's baby is okay |
Reviewed By: something like human [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is pretty entertaining. just wanted you to know that those twins are huge...most twins don't weigh much more than 6 lbs full term. and if they were premature...they would weigh less. my evil twin and i were only 2 wks early and together weighed 9 lbs. but it's fiction...you can do what you want...i mean, it is two men having babies... |
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