Reviewed By: sarahbara On: December 28, 2009 17:52 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 3 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10
Comment/Review: It was a good storyline but sometimes you left out words. like instead of saying 'she walked away' you would say 'walked away' and you would leave out the she. It was kinda hard to understand that way.