| "Life's Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: NightShadow On: March 07, 2003 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!! You have done a great job with it. It's kinda of weird readin' about Amy being the Assassin but it doesn't matter. Usually I don't really like how it goes back and forth between characters but it doesn't really bug me that much on this story. Well keep up the great work and update soon!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: reandn On: February 10, 2003 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I've read this story and Assasin's Loyalty and I really like them both. It's unusual to see Ami cast in this kind of role and I'd like to see more of the story soon. I didn't see any big spelling or grammar errors. I only gave Style of Writing a rating of 8 because of all the different point of veiws you used. I prefer stories that mainly stick with the main character's POV. Still that's just my personal preference and it didn't stop me from enjoying the story. Just try not to get too carried away with it :) Well thats about it, and like I said before I hope to read more from you soon. |
