| "Subella" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh that was good. *drools*
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: taker On: January 17, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I'm not into Yaoi. I enjoyed this. VERY creative. I hope to see more things like this myself.
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Reviewed By: reader101 On: April 16, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is good. The smut's alright. It's the premise, though. It seemed like you were writing smut for the hell of it- which is fine. But smut's better when there's a point. Otherwise I may as well go look for porn. |
Reviewed By: Susan (suenami927@yahoo.com) On: January 24, 2003 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
J.C. Christ Steph, I almost had a coronary! This is even hotter than the original. Dang, way to go girl ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 05:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...That last line was traumatizing .. Now I have to go to Bardock to rid myself of the horrifying images that conjured up.....0.0...Excellent story though....loved the boys in the shower...mmmmm. Why dont things like happen to meeeee :( Veggie and Radditz ...Gt Trunks and Bardock...I'm not fussy :D I suppose the ultimate Bardock/Radditz is ruled out...:( too..icky *shudder* Enough of my ramblings...You sooo have to keep this up Raven...you have a great knack for delicious Yaoi fics!!! :D |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you put it up Yay..... Great I loved this one very much. |
Reviewed By: Sony On: January 23, 2003 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
The story was good and the only problem I found was that the text was cramped and was cut off towards the right of the page. I dunno if that's mm.org's deal or yours but I just thought I'd let you know. You should DEFINATELY continue the one shots involving 2 or more male saiya-jins and a single saiya-jin female. It you do take requests, it should be Vegeta, Radditz and Brolli and some female. *drools* Gwah...you have managed to make me happy. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 24, 2003 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been more jealous of an original character in my life...You go Suebella!
Excellent fic raven |
