| "Wanting...." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: moonscout11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was cool! but i wonder what akito wants with tohru. anyway, keep up the good work, i give it a 10/10!
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Reviewed By: Aya On: April 02, 2003 15:47 CST
Comment/Review:
How they address each other:
Tooru: Shigure-san, Kyou-kun, Sohma-kun (up to vol 3 of the manga, then Yuki-kun after vol 3 of the manga)
Kyou: Shigure, Hatori, Tooru, Yuki (amongst other endearing nicknames ;)
Yuki: Shigure, Hatori, Honda-san, Kyou (& a slew of other nicks)
Hatori: Shigure, Honda-kun, Yuki, Kyou
Shigure: Tooru-kun, Yuki-kun, Kyou-kun, Ha-san |
Reviewed By: ohimesama On: January 27, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
SUGOI!! *wai yuki's sooo mischievious *
I am loving this fic!!! Yay yukiru! ummm can't wait for akito and toru's meeting *grin* |
Reviewed By: ohimesama On: January 27, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
SUGOI!! *wai yuki's sooo mischievious * >O |
Reviewed By: Starlette_Akiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I noticed the way yuki was...ahhah..lol he was pretty bold. But ne way, I'm finishing up 'An appointment with darkness' and that has the akiru pairing in it...I'll fix up the Yuki thing a bit, but I always thought he was sexier that way!! LMFAO!:D |
Reviewed By: Sarryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm eagerly awaiting more. |
Reviewed By: Baka Blue Tiger On: January 26, 2003 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey...you know what???? even though you dont have the anime and stuff to watch...you still got the story in pretty good shape!!!! except for yuki's boldness...lolz....iit really doesnt matter though... but theres no akito x tohru in this chapter!!!! T_T but dont worry !! i can wait!!!! ^^ hehheheheh |
Reviewed By: merrow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wai!!!! LOVE AKIRU! I like it so far! write more ne! ^__^ wicked ecchiness my type of fic!
ok just one minor thing: akito calls Hatori, Hatori . Ha-san is what Shigure calls Hatori. Other than that it's GREAT!!! |
