| "Green Horizons" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: The_female_lecturess On: July 21, 2003 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! I love it update!!!!!! PPLZ!!!????? I love you |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 06, 2003 12:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story! i loved that part where Bulma fell off the bed. added something solid to the scene.
very original! i've very read a DBZ fic like this one! Goku and Chi both at the psyche hospital... i don't think you could pay a psychiatrist enough for listening to those two. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 06, 2003 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh man! i never would have thought of Veg and Tien! and the ChiChi and Goku bit was funny! He never even thought of a divorce! this one actually made me feel bad for Chi! and that doesn't happen often! Bulma and the Pickle doing pranks is really funny! those drive threw windows are just asking for it! the wacked out Gohan bit is killer. i think that's the best part of all. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: May 06, 2003 10:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! a Piccolo and Bulma fic!
and best of all...
ChiChi's in a mental ward.
(dances with glee)
i might have to join her |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Bwahahahah! egg bombs! I love it, I always suspected Piccolo was a junvenile delinquint at heart.And VxT?? That's just sick...yet strangely amusing... |
Reviewed By: Salsa Kitty On: February 27, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he, I love reading P/B fics... to bad there's not a lot of them... Anyhoo... I'm likin' it so far, please, update soon.
Salsa Kitty |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohh!! (squeals)what an awesome pairing!! This is the first fic I've read with a BxP couple; and I've read a LOT! Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where this goes. (bounces up and down) |
Reviewed By: Fire Burner On: February 12, 2003 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great I can't wait to read more keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
heh... I don't update often myself, so I wont give you TOO much shit about that... well ok, maybe I will.
DARN IT! I've been waiting a looooooong time to read the next chapter :P And there you go, making it all awesome only to stop it THERE!? BAD YOU!
*takes a deep breath*
Ok.. evil rant finished.
This WAS excellent though :) Who's Vegeta's secret crush? I LOVE the relationship between Goku and Vegeta that u set up... i can see Goku as a lap dog.. heh
Keep going :) I'll be here for the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: XZanayu On: January 26, 2003 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice beginning. Please continue!!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo, don't pitch it... Actually, I like this idea... ^_^ U never see a Piccolo x Bulma romance or *looks at the genres* should I say hentai... ^-^ Lol, and poor Vegeta, he just can't seem to phase an interested Goku... ^_~ Hmm... wait a minute.... Where's Master Roshi at? It is his house, right? ...Is he up to something...? *looks suspicious* Alright, alright, I'll leave u to ur work then... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: January 24, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, personally, I like it... the situations you've created are quite origional... ie: Chichi losing her marbles... *smirk* For some reason, if that actually did happen on the show, I wouldn't be surprised... Also, you set the romantic scene between Piccolo and Bulma BEAUTIFULY (sp?)... there was no sign of cheezy fluff (hate that) but pure intregue... go you :) keep it up. I'll be waiting :) |
