Reviewed By: FF-fan On: September 12, 2003 17:10 CDT Comment/Review: Please continue this fic fast, OK?
I love it!!
Reviewed By: brad On: February 07, 2003 18:05 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: I like the story but you need more subpots like the bad guy have some hench men. all bad guys have hench men. It helps the good guy get stronger. Are you going to keep right if so post 1 a month. It tell poeple you are still righting.hope you keep it up I love reading fanfics but I hate some sooo much. and I hate flamers for stoping poeple from righting some good storeys. Befor you right any more you should have a plot in rufe. hope you have a good day
