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| "Some Life..." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: LittleMica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this fanfic.. its one of the best around and trully unique!!! Hope you get chance to write some more....
| Reviewed By: Jako On: July 09, 2003 15:50 CDT
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This is a great fanfic and PLEASE update! I'm DYING!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Crecy On: June 01, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for an update, No rhyme intended. I'm a REALLY impatiant person. You have to update soon to keep me intrested. | Reviewed By: Sakiku On: February 14, 2003 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I loved your fanfic, please write some more of that stuff! Anyways, this is a REALLY good AU, and although I don't like most AU's, this one is much, much, much better than some ordinary B/V get-together. I think, the character you gave to Vegeta is really fitting for him because I suppose, he has never been under Friezer's tyranny as one of the 3 surviving Saiyans, and he DOES have manners (contrary to the stuck-up bad-ass he is in the TV-Series)
So: Keep up the good work and let us hear some more!!!!
p. s. I think that many people read this, but only few can take the time to review (at least that is why I am not reviewing most stories cause my internet access is limited to 10 minutes a day and so I have to save all stories to my harddrive and read them offline) | Reviewed By: shadow On: February 07, 2003 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1 word
excellent
all of it | Reviewed By: qcati-qcati On: February 01, 2003 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, where should i begin? it's great. i and some of my friends write stories also, and your writing style reminds me a lot of our style. perhaps ours is a bit less serious most of the time, but that is because of the sheer volume of our work and the need of comic relief. your spelling and grammar...i can't really think of anything wrong, but i seem to be left with the impression of a few words i would have chosen differently. so i suppose you can relegate that to a 10 also. your originality-superb. i must say that goku being fairly close to vegeta shocked me, as well as rubbing against the grain. i enjoyed your story very much. i'd overall give you a nine. not that it isn't the best i've read, other than mine and my friends'. i would, however, hate to give youa ten, because giving perfect ratings would tend to not mean much if given out for anything i love. keep up the good work. i am looking forward to more....oh, yeah. i would like to say this though-when you called vegeta a "flame-haired" person, i thought you were referring to his hair color, and i was confused for a while until i realized you were talking about his hair shape. but don't worry, i call vegeta's hair "candle flame shaped" all the time. why don't you e-mail me at mdanniegirl@aol.com? it's not my usual address, but i'll be sure to check for an e-mail from you. |
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