| "Enemy of My Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bsasami153 On: February 24, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was riveted to the computer reading this. I love Sesshoumaru and of course Inuyasha too!. Keep up the good work. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Katrina Marie On: February 24, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mou, I'm happy you've finally updated! *shudders* I can't get enough of this fic! This seems so much like Sesshomaru, it's scary. Like, in a weird, demented way. Like, if Sesshomaru really loved her he'd act this way. I always was a big fan of Sess/Kago because he seems cold and lonely and she seems to be cheerful and a bit withdrawn, so they could fill each other out. ^_^. They cancel each other out! Ahhh, it's like they're one person. It's great! Update soon, cause this fic drives me mad. |
Reviewed By: cleverwitch On: February 21, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, I'm very intrested to see what happens next, update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Fan On: February 19, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter three was perfect, just the right length. If you wanted to, you could have written more (I say the more, the better!). The cool thing about your writing is that you draw in the reader with your elaborate descriptions of the characters' actions and emotions. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter:o) |
Reviewed By: darkk_angel On: February 19, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is quite a good fanfic... keep it up, man! your lemons rock:) |
Reviewed By: Renangel On: February 19, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! ^^ There aren't many ficcies out there like this, and I wish I could find more. However, your's was just great! ^^
One complaint though, YOU NEED TO UPDATE FASTER!!! I was practically *dying* every day you didn't update. I usually don't visit this site, but because I wanted some updates, I kept coming back. Lol. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: February 18, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!! The paragraphs are spaced nicely enough that your eyes don't get tired from reading, I could feel where you were going with the plot, and that has to be the BEST Sess/ Kag lemon with a plot I have ever read!!!!... except it was a bit long... but my favoritist part was the end where he loved her!!!!!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! Please continue this story!!!!!!!!
WHEN did she figure out it was Sess... and how do they get away from Naraku????????
I rated 8 for enjoyment because that was a HUGE cliffhanger and youtend to take a couple of weeks to update..... although I appreciate the quality too. |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg how can u end it there!!!just when it was getin good too!!:-(anyways i hope u update soon!updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate
Ja Ne^_^
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover On: February 18, 2003 16:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwww...that's the cutest lemon I have ever read. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it very much...I hope that Inu Yasha finds out soon and gets all mad and sad ; ) |
Reviewed By: Karete-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 22:20 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. I would pay a lot of money to be able to write like that. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the length was enough to show Sesshoumaru's emotional evolution. I think Kagome's response strongly paved the way to Sesshoumaru's acceptance of his feelings as well. I can't wait to see how the story will evolve and how they will get away from Naraku's clutches. Will you be exploring Kagome's feelings? |
Reviewed By: erin On: February 17, 2003 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
i see the evolution of sesshou, but even in a single chapter it seems really intense, so to say. i believe that he has to be wishing for her a very long time to como to the conclusion at the end that he loves her. i hope that you profundice on this aspec in the next chapters. Well, this is mi comment, but overall, i like it pretty much. i have been following your others histories as well. i hope you update soon, |
Reviewed By: Katzztar On: February 17, 2003 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bored?? NO Freakin way!!!! too long? NOT!
I loved it!! This chapter was definetely worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: Ale Map On: February 19, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long but loverly. I'm not complaining about the length though, because there are too many people that put characters together without going into a plosible why (me included). You got 9's because I think nothing can ever really be a ten except the Enjoyment Factor, 'cause I really enjoyed it. (Sorry about my spelling.) |
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