| "Enemy of My Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadow_goddesskio On: February 03, 2003 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a story like yours a long time and I think that it is a great story because you have been original with this plot so far and I hope that you put more of this story up soon. |
Reviewed By: Kirara-chan On: February 03, 2003 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read a story like yours a long time and I think that it is a great story because you have been original with this plot so far and I hope that you put more of this story up soon. |
Reviewed By: Katrina Marie On: January 30, 2003 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damnit, I can feel my own arousal through my pants... Does that do well to justify my ratings? My cheeks are flushed and I find myself wanting more. Update soon, please please? |
Reviewed By: yukiko3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! This is really good! Keep going or i'm going to die from not knowing what's next!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KiiKii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that was really good. I'm glad you didn't decide to to the whole mushy-romance lemon, because that's just not how the characters in Inu-Yasha are. You should really stick with what your writing, because it has a lot of appeal. Thanks for writing, and please update!
*~(\/) LiMeAwAy GiRL *~(\/) |
Reviewed By: gackt_emu On: February 19, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! More, more, more please!!! |
Reviewed By: Kairi-Chan(to lazy to sign in) On: January 26, 2003 10:35 CST
Comment/Review:
wow!that was VERY intresting! Keep going!WOW!
*gets the inuyasha gang and a bag of chips and start to make this in 2 a movie*
*Kairi-Chan* |
Reviewed By: beth On: January 26, 2003 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was great. as we southern people like to say. that got me all hot and bothered. please continue the story. I would love to read more. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: January 26, 2003 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!!!!!!
YOU JUST CAN'T DO THAT TO ME!!!!!
NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!!!!!!
*getting real mad shouting no fair and pouting*
well you have to stop some where but WHY THERE!
NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!!
NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR!NO FAIR! |
Reviewed By: PyRo_hottie2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I LUVED your ficcy... updated!!! I wanna read more >:) |
Reviewed By: Hekate On: January 25, 2003 12:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is very interesting. You tend to bring out the underlying emotions. Also I like how you incorporate the environment.
One critique is that, especially in the first chapter, you skipped from one character's thoughts to another without any notice and a reader could get confused... I thin overall you did a good job and should continue. |
Reviewed By: duke of spades On: January 25, 2003 06:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please update!!!!!!!!!!!! must read more!!! you do good lemons! |
Reviewed By: Artemis_of_NewMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
FINISH IT SOON!!!!! OMFG!that was realy good! you HAVE to keep going. Please, for my sake, for all of our sakes. Keep going for Gods!p/z?
Artemis |
Reviewed By: la-la On: January 29, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
real original, you dont see so many sees/kag fics, also great spelling, and you dont switch to first person and put yourself in the place of the character |
Reviewed By: Obsession On: February 19, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a REALLY good writer!! I loved tis chapter! I hope that you update soon, because I just can't wait until the next part! I like how you write realistic lemons. The ones that are all mush and are so obviously fake really annoy me. Anyways... You are a great writer, and please update soon! |
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