| "The Fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: black mage raven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: purplemonkey On: June 01, 2004 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: S.M.S.86 On: January 27, 2004 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. it's great. I haven't read one that has a story plot that comes close to yours. Please up-date soon, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cubiax66 On: December 06, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it kicks ass give us all more
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Reviewed By: karena On: July 09, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that you find time and inspiration soon to continue this story. It's been monthes since it's even been updated. As always, looking forward to more (hopefully soon). |
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Miss Lucifer On: June 09, 2003 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay, go you good thing! I've been wondering where Vegeta Goddess went to, after the NC17 fiasco at ff.net. damn, that made me mad, almost all of my favourite fics were deleted. and all those lose reviews for Temptation Waits...I swear I nearly cried for you.
well to get on to the actual reviewing- I really like this fic. I'm not normally one for P/V becuase I'm a self confessed B/V worshipper, and again, not fond of post-apocolyptic fics, but I am really enjoying this. Pan has always been an interesting character becuase I always thought that Bra should have been stronger becuase of the purity of her blood compared to Pans, tho this wasnt the case. Pan seems more saiyan than even Goku was. This makes her and Vegeta a good pair...I guess...poor Bulma :(. are we going to find out what happened to her? well I guess I want more hentai, coz I'm a hentai freak, and proud of it :)
update soon! i'll be waiting, so be quick with it |
Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i love it write more soon!! i cant wait 4 da next chapter |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: March 11, 2003 12:02 CST
Comment/Review:
An awesome fic that I hope you two get inspiration for soon! Just curious as to how you're going to have this story turn out? Happy? or a Sad ending? I'm wondering why they haven't taken or built a spaceship to escape these monsters and blown the planet up? You know so The Fallen can't colonize another planet. Or, found their hide-out? Something along those lines? Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ hehehe, muchly liked. Poor 18, she really misses Krillen. Please write more when you get time or inspiration! |
Reviewed By: NIGHTSCREAM On: February 14, 2003 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, I look forward to the next installment of the fic. PLEASE don't keep us waiting to long! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: February 14, 2003 08:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it, it is so dark. Loved 18. |
Reviewed By: VGChaos On: January 30, 2003 04:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this fic looks good at this place, *looks around mm.org* hmmmmm
^_^ you know i already think this is a great story, made better because it's thought of by the great Vegeta Goddess! |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: January 25, 2003 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed this fic before but now that you have it here it won't have to be edited so much and we (the readers) can enjoy your story as it was meant to be. |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you put this fic back up. It's going to be great!! |
