"Say It Like You Mean It" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 11:51 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NO! Dont let Kaiba shoot Yami or Yugi. I luv them 2 much
Yugi: DIE KAIBA!!!
*pulls out flamethrower* If Yami or Yugi r hurt I will kill Kaiba
*sends Kaiba a bomb that wiil blow up in his face* |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 15:28 CST Comment/Review: Mooooooore! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 11:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I want Yugi and Yami 2 get back 2gether but I dont give a damn wat happens 2 Seto
Yugi: Mooooore! |
Reviewed By: Luna On: February 13, 2003 16:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i want yuugi and yami to get together. |
Reviewed By: Yami no Chrestes On: February 15, 2003 11:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Sander: I can take on a few chibis
Darina: Oh, really, then, what's that behind you?(Sander jumps back)
Sander: Ahh, WHEEERRREEE??!!
Chrestes(Smirks from her reading): Yuka said only of you don't review, dum dum. Get it?(Sander growls at her)
Sander: And...what if I dont?(Darina gives him her death stare)
Darina: Why I outght to...are you trying to insult one of my favorite stories.(Fire burns in her eyes)
Sander: err...nope, nope, not at all(backs away)
Darina: That's better. Great story, Yuka, I love the plot, the pairings and the style. Very original. Everybody else here agrees with me, right?(Sander just gives a frown.)
Darina: RIGHT??!!(Sander gets a sweat)
Sander: right...(runs out of the room before amy more trouble apopears. Nearly bumps into Marik on him way out.)
MArik: Watch it, Sander!(Dasha runs after Sander, yelling at him)
Chrestes: hey, Marik. They're having fun.
MArik: I see...(Sits down next to Chrestes) What ya readin?
Chrestes: Just some girl named Yuka's fiction. It's pretty awesome.
MArik: Let me see...Nice(Hears Darina still yelling at Sander and running all over the house)
Chrestes: They're having fun, all right. Anyway, I'll say what Darina didn't get to...(sweat-drops as she hears Darina give out a big yell)...um, yah. So, keep up the great job and hope to hear more. This is great stuff you got here.(Marik gives a small knob and goes back to reading the fic) |
Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 19:49 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That is really good! Keep writing please! I want to know what Kaiba does to Yugi!!!
Yami: don't you dare hurt a hair on my Aibou's perfect head or you will forever be locked away in the shadow realm!!
o_O chill Yami....anyways please updarte we're all goin crazy! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 16:33 CST Comment/Review: you are an EVIL EVIL person. Moooore! |
Reviewed By: Dark Millennium Girl On: February 06, 2003 15:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Font Color
Interesting, Yuka, I really enjoey this story and I write my own stories, but...I don't put them on this site. Maybe, i will in the future. Anyway, keep up the good job... |
Reviewed By: Yami no Chrestes On: February 06, 2003 15:08 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Vvvveeerrryyy exiting. I like those kinds of stories. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and I love Yami and Yugi paired togethewr. I think they go so well perfectly. I would be mad at Kaiba if he did ANYTHING to Yugi.(But, like I said before, I really love the story) |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 10:34 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Plz update soon. I wanna find out wat happens. Will Seto rape Yugi?
Yugi: OO;;;; |
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:29 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Write More!!!! I want to know what happens!!! If Kaiba lays one hand on Yugi i'll sick 100 rabid Yami clones on him!!! Please continue, your story is great!
Yami: Must...destroy...KAIBA!!!!
^_^; Do continue quickly. |
Reviewed By: Queen Evil On: January 31, 2003 22:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love the story but you really should hurry up and update the darn fic. |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: January 25, 2003 15:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: nice job so far, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 25, 2003 13:04 CST Comment/Review: This is pretty good so far. I hope you do continue this soon. I like Yami/Yugi pairings too. They make such a cute couple. |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: No! Don't let Kaiba hurt Yami! ;_; I hate that evil bakayaro. *shoots flames at Kaiba* DIE! Anyway, I think this story's cool, though I don't like the fact that Kaiba likes Yugi. @$#%@^#^%$#$ (Various cursing) ^_^ Looking forward to the update. |
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