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Reviewed By: Amy_Rose(not logged in yet) On: April 19, 2005 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I do have a suggestion. Why don't you get Yuuka's friends over like she said and write from there. You don't have to take it though. It is your fic. By the way, I like this fic! Update Soon Plz!
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Reviewed By: tarigarma [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 12:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
please keep writing is a very good fic. i hope you finish it soon |
Reviewed By: Sora On: April 13, 2003 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sora: I have an idea... u could use me and my Yami... although it sounds weord... i have 2 of them, Chibi & Maru, i call Chibi that because she is Chibi... and we dont know her name
Chibi: Dat cuz i dunno my name eiver, ish Chibi fow now!
Maru: Chibi be silent while we tell her what our Item can do
Sora: sorry about them... now.... Our item can see into the past, and make you realize the truth.... Very appropriate for your case
Maru: your starting to sound like me Hikari
Chibi: dat cuz she ish u... sorTa
Sora: you might not want to use our idea of putting us in... but at least but a few of us, or just one... Our item is the Millenium Cat... cuz it is a statue of Bastet, the cat godess
Chibi: KAWAII KITTY ITEM...y
Sora: Okay...no more sugar for Chibi, get sugar high way to easily, by the way, we arnt from Japan, I am from Canada... plz dont call us Kunuks
Chibi: *wispers* Use me... dey are dumbys
Maru&Sora: we heard that
Sora: K... hopefully you'll use our idea.... if not... meh
Chibi,Sora,Maru: JA NE!
Chibi: I ish #1, Use Chibi-Chan!!! |
Reviewed By: Hot Chick On: February 24, 2003 11:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!! It was such a good story!! |
Reviewed By: Sandy-chan On: February 20, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there,
I just finished readin your fanfic. YEAH! And man did I loved it!!!! Well i just wanted to tell u to keep up the good work and that im sure that I'll enjoy the next chapter so please finish it soon. Well BYE-BYE! |
Reviewed By: Sandy-chan On: February 20, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there,
I just finished readin your fanfic. YEAH! And man did I loved it!!!! Well i just wanted to tell u to keep up the good work and that im sure that I'll enjoy the next chapter so please finish it soon. Well BYE-BYE! |
Reviewed By: Fever On: February 09, 2003 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Writw more!! I'm in a madhouse right now!!! I'm going to kick Seto's @$$ if he hurts either one of them. But do what you want, just write dammit. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! Dont let Kaiba shoot Yami or Yugi. I luv them 2 much
Yugi: DIE KAIBA!!!
*pulls out flamethrower* If Yami or Yugi r hurt I will kill Kaiba
*sends Kaiba a bomb that wiil blow up in his face* |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 15:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Mooooooore! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want Yugi and Yami 2 get back 2gether but I dont give a damn wat happens 2 Seto
Yugi: Mooooore! |
Reviewed By: Luna On: February 13, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want yuugi and yami to get together. |
Reviewed By: Yami no Chrestes On: February 15, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sander: I can take on a few chibis
Darina: Oh, really, then, what's that behind you?(Sander jumps back)
Sander: Ahh, WHEEERRREEE??!!
Chrestes(Smirks from her reading): Yuka said only of you don't review, dum dum. Get it?(Sander growls at her)
Sander: And...what if I dont?(Darina gives him her death stare)
Darina: Why I outght to...are you trying to insult one of my favorite stories.(Fire burns in her eyes)
Sander: err...nope, nope, not at all(backs away)
Darina: That's better. Great story, Yuka, I love the plot, the pairings and the style. Very original. Everybody else here agrees with me, right?(Sander just gives a frown.)
Darina: RIGHT??!!(Sander gets a sweat)
Sander: right...(runs out of the room before amy more trouble apopears. Nearly bumps into Marik on him way out.)
MArik: Watch it, Sander!(Dasha runs after Sander, yelling at him)
Chrestes: hey, Marik. They're having fun.
MArik: I see...(Sits down next to Chrestes) What ya readin?
Chrestes: Just some girl named Yuka's fiction. It's pretty awesome.
MArik: Let me see...Nice(Hears Darina still yelling at Sander and running all over the house)
Chrestes: They're having fun, all right. Anyway, I'll say what Darina didn't get to...(sweat-drops as she hears Darina give out a big yell)...um, yah. So, keep up the great job and hope to hear more. This is great stuff you got here.(Marik gives a small knob and goes back to reading the fic) |
Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is really good! Keep writing please! I want to know what Kaiba does to Yugi!!!
Yami: don't you dare hurt a hair on my Aibou's perfect head or you will forever be locked away in the shadow realm!!
o_O chill Yami....anyways please updarte we're all goin crazy! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
you are an EVIL EVIL person. Moooore! |
Reviewed By: Dark Millennium Girl On: February 06, 2003 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Interesting, Yuka, I really enjoey this story and I write my own stories, but...I don't put them on this site. Maybe, i will in the future. Anyway, keep up the good job... |
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