| "Immortality and Death" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: snowecat On: March 10, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't get over the horrible spelling. You must not have english as a first language. Good idea though. |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: February 21, 2003 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Yeah that idea sound's good to me. Whatever you want to do. I can understand what your saying so it doesn't matter to me. If that's what you want to do. I think it's a good idea. Anyway good chapter! I wonder what Vegeta will think when Bulma and him are sparing? Ok well I got to go.
^_-* Bye Bye! |
Reviewed By: rtjh On: February 21, 2003 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, this is an awsome fic. and regarding that little note at tehn end i personally DO NOT think that you should take it down and repost if anything changes. the story is fine just the way it is. you are a good writer and please keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: February 13, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey how's it going? Fine here I guess! Anyway when will you update this story? I hope soon it's great. I'm glad you updated Universal Highschool!
Your going deep into the story! Anyway have fun writing ok! And yes I know school is a real bitch
which I'm glad I don't have to go anymore! I think I would have shot myself if I had to!!! LoL
Well I'm going to go ok Bye Bye ^_-*! |
Reviewed By: Millie On: January 31, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story but you have too many spelling mistakes |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: January 30, 2003 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Awww that was so nice! You didn't have to update cause it was my B-Day! Not that I'm saying
don't!!! Please do! LoL...Anyway I think it's nice though. Thanks It's a great present! What more could I want on my B-Day?! (MMM...Vegeta)LoL
Yeah I think alot of people want him. Well thanks I'm glad you will update by Friday!!! C-Ya can't wait til the next chapter of your story! Your doing great! Have fun writing! Bye!!! ^_-* |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 00:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey great story, I am looking forward to seeing more and hope that you post again soon. On a more personal note, as a writer myself....I have found that I get very few reviews on my fiction and while that discouraged me for a while, I decided to let it go and just write for my own enjoyment, rather than try and force people to review my work. So just keep up the good work...I hope to read more soon. |
Reviewed By: Immortality and Death On: January 28, 2003 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great chapter i really liked it! Is Bulma going to tell Vegeta about her past and what happened to her? I hope they beat Freiza's and Gero! I hate both of them. Well please update soon
maybe today please cause it's my B-Day! yeah buddy! Well C-ya Update soon! ^_-* |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: January 26, 2003 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey great fic! But you left me with a cliffhanger!
Man please update like tomarrow! please!!!! I think it was great! I wonder what Vegeta will think??? Oh well just please update soon! I really like this story,and I what to know what is going to happen. It doesn't matter how many review's you get as long as you get some! I'm really into this story. If you can,update today!
LoL Well C-ya can't wait til next chapter! ^_-*! |
