| "universal highschool" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was one heart felt fic. Very well done but you really need to proof read it a little.
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Reviewed By: Laina On: June 26, 2003 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...That was a great B/V & G/CC fic.Maybe you can write a sequil? |
Reviewed By: Yak-Cool On: March 11, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello i think that ive posted B4 but i dont see them now but anywayz i would like to put your fic on my site with your permission also i read that part at
the beginning of 1 of ur chaps but unfortuneateley i wont be able to post your fic 4 a while cuz my site i made at school and i would get it removed off the
net if i posted your fic there cuz it has (profanity) and my school is a bitch they filter everything i can hardley get onto any good sites. But when i transfer
it to my home comput ill be able to post your fic on my site and alot more. My email is: (Yahk_Cool@hotmail.com) so plzz e-mail me if i can post it on my site
when i get on my own comput which will hopefully soon. Great fic by the way.
Yak-Cool |
Reviewed By: Yak-Cool On: March 01, 2003 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi i have been following your story 4 a while i thought i reviewed
be-for but i geuss i diddent anywayz you have a really good fic
going and i will gladley post it on my sight a.s.a.p but i cant
right now cuz i started my site at school and i would get my site
removed if i had your fic on my site due to some of the content but
once i get it off my school server i will post a review with my e-mail
and we could put it on my site. And i would really like to put it
there/Great fic :) |
Reviewed By: bEcCa On: February 21, 2003 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
aww how sad... poor bulma..... so wat will happen? will bulma live or die? update SOON!!! welpz payce outZ~! |
Reviewed By: Yahk-cool On: February 17, 2003 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great fic plz update soon i dont ussually like sad fics but 4 sum reason this 1 is one of my fav fics |
Reviewed By: lili_30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! This is an amazing fic!!! *pouts* You deserve more reviews!
Anyways, I can't wait until you update again! ^_^
Poor Bulma and ChiChi! They've both been raped by Frieza and Cooler??? *shudders at the thought*
*~Lili~* |
Reviewed By: Snugwel1 On: February 10, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoying the story so far, cant wait for the next chaptor.P.S your chaptor 6 and 7 is the same thing. |
Reviewed By: FoxyXGirlz On: February 10, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, very sad though |
Reviewed By: sango On: February 13, 2003 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it.i'm also reading your other story immortality and death love both of them can wait til you update both stoeys |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: February 13, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what's up??? Man I though people would update alot more than they have! There being mean!!!
Oh well...anyway having fun? I'm having fun reading it! Getting really good!!! I'm so into it now! Man poor Bulma. I hope Vegeta will get strong
enough soon! Well got to go. I'll review later
bye bye ^_-* |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: February 13, 2003 18:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I thought people would REVIEW!!!! Alot more than they have. ************* I'm so dumb! LoL Bye ^_-* |
Reviewed By: lynnette On: February 06, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
vey sexy and cool |
Reviewed By: serena On: February 06, 2003 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool |
Reviewed By: lynnette On: February 05, 2003 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cool |
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