| "Total Eclipse of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: G On: July 25, 2005 01:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah, it was nice to read, you should write de sequel about Trowa recovering his memory, and by the way it was correct, your bit of spanish believe me I would know
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read it again this time listening to the song... (Duo Shinigami Muse interrupting: YOU MOVED HER TO TEARS THIS TIME!!!! WHAT DID YOU DO? I HATE TO SE HER LIKE THIS! NOW I HAVE TO SUFFER!) Ahem yes anyways.. can you soare me another sob fest and write a sequel! Like when Trowa goets his memories back please! I hate cring... It was an absolutely gorgeous fic... But I hate crying... Please help the sad R_Winner
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Reviewed By: sindy On: July 13, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I love 3x4!!! please write more if U need help with spanis I gladly can help I'm mexican BTW my mail is
pokenicole18@hotmail.com
bye |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Fic! But What the hell did you do to poor Quatre!? Trowa would never leave the poor boy like that! Thank you for adding spanish by the way! I've seen tooo many people put japanese where it doesn't belong in stories. Ai Shiteru me ass! |
Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd On: February 01, 2003 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleave what Trowa did to Quatre. I'm so sad for Quatre. but the story was good |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this and I can definitely see a sequel, so please consider it. The ending was too sad to leave there. |
Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 07:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, the fic was nice, but it begs for a sequel... You could always make three or four chapters...
Like, their relationship like this, torned apart, and then the happy ending everybody loves, when Trowa asks for forgiveness.
You see, you said this fic wasn't your best, but I think it was very good. I'm sick and tired of seeing Trowa being sweet and kind to Quatre, expecially at love making.
My own gw fics are like that, but that's because I lack on creativity. Quatre is the sweet one, I believe Trowa to be more rude. He is, for sure, not polite at the beginning of the series.
He sounds pretty stupid after he lost his memory, always saying 'I'm sorry' and crying and shivering. You should explore that. But that's just an idea.
I liked your fic, very much. Congratulations for the good work. |
