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Reviewed By: Kat1132 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Now! Please? *Uses puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: YxY4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Person write more on this story!!!!!!!! or I shall have to flame *sigh* I hate flaming so write more god damn you!
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay people! I will post more in just a bit, kk? |
Reviewed By: misc On: March 10, 2003 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
:looks up: Where is it? :looks down: Where is the rest of the fic? :looks to the right: Not there. :looks left: Not there either! WRITE MORE DAMN IT!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Ragna01 On: February 15, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic fic dude!!!PLEASE update soon!!!
Your such a gret writter...but why Katsuya beat up the little poor Yugi? |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 08:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it do more! |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
*chanting* Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Lemon! Other than that, very good^_^ |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. It has this -zing- thing to it. keep it going! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hallia On: January 27, 2003 17:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Pretty good story, but i recommend this cool invention called spell-check. Not to mention your punctuation is kinda odd... anyway, keep up the good writing. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE ASAP!
Yugi: I dont wanna get beat up by bullies
Put it this way, Yami can kiss it all better
Yugi: O_O *gos off 2 find Yami*
o_O I was just kidding |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 27, 2003 00:50 CST
Comment/Review:
MUST UPDATE ASAP!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE OH PRETTY PLEASE?!!! I LOVE IT SO FAR!!!! REALLY! ^_^ IT'S SOOOOO KAWAII!!! Want Lemony Goodness too... ^_~ heehee. MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRREEEE!!! aRiGaTo!!! I'm sorry about your mom though...
Yuugi+Yami4EVER!!! |
Reviewed By: holo On: January 27, 2003 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmm. interesting. do more |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would be much better without the author's notes tacked into the story. They're really distracting and ruin the mood you're creating within the scenes. Please consider taking them out (or at least leaving them out of any future installments). |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 26, 2003 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this one! It's really good so far! I hope you post another chapter of it soon! |
Reviewed By: kairi On: January 26, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awsome story!!!
Write more soon!!!! |
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