| "Coming back" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Sweeeeeeet story
Reviewed By: Spikecicle On: September 16, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story kicks ass it's great how you potrayed Kagome's mom when she no longer seems to care about Kagome or what happens to her family.I hope that you can update soon.Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Night Light Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is not a flame but you need to go back to school and learn about capolization, spelling, and, punctuation!
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ouch. Punctuation would help a lot. |
Reviewed By: Alia Lowe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a really cool fic so far. Its sad that Kagome's mom doesn't care about Kagome, but at least she has someone to run to (Inuyasha). I hope you update soon and good luck with your own mom at home.
~Alia |
Reviewed By: kitsune magic 4 On: January 29, 2003 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
This sounds like it will turn out into a really nice fic, but it's really hard for mr to understand because of all of the grammer errors. But other than that, this is a first class fic! I hope that you write some more soon!!!
And this Miss_Marilyn69 person was wrong. You were right, it is pronounced Kilala! :) |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story so far...but you don't have the right name for the demon cat her name is Kirara ; ) |
