| "Mesmermon's Castle" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: dralan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great please for the love of god keep writing more |
Reviewed By: Dragons Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok graet fic but why did you stop?
By the way if you don't start back up soon I'll hunt you down and make you. |
Reviewed By: firedragon79 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more chapters! |
Reviewed By: TT examiner On: January 20, 2003 21:03 CST
Comment/Review:
write more!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Someonesomewhere On: November 02, 2002 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. There's a serious lack of good erotic story writers on the 'net. Could use a teensy bit of editting, and maybe a bit more varied descriptions, but otherwise awesome. Fun, dreamy set-up, story and style. Well-written characters too! While I know it's a sin to rush these things, I'd just like you to know that if a new chapter isn't posted soon, you'll be finding a horse's head in your bed. |
Reviewed By: Godzilla On: October 20, 2002 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic, the only part i didn't like was in the first chapter with gatomon and kari. i don't know why i didn't like it i just didn't |
Reviewed By: Red Shadow On: October 16, 2002 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Good job Archangel. Pleaepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease write more!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hitomi On: December 24, 2002 06:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good sounding and stuff, so keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: analogman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good,please write more chapter |
Reviewed By: Kari B. On: October 04, 2002 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OY HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO INNOCENT KARI! LOL J/K please hurry and write more! |
Reviewed By: point26 On: April 30, 2002 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is realy good i cant wait for the next chaptar i think it s fun too read and funny |
Reviewed By: A-man [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY WITH MINOR ODDS AND ENDS THAT COULD BE FIXED. ALL IN ALL IT IS A GOOD SERIES AND I HOPE TO SEE NEW CHAPTERS AND MANY OF THEM. |
Reviewed By: sorato [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 23:50 CST
Comment/Review:
You're story is cool! I love hentai stories even though you don't have the couples i like. Just keep up the good work and huryy and finish that story! |
Reviewed By: Pixie On: December 15, 2001 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
HAH! this fic is so crazy, you've gotta keep it going. i kinda noticed that tai n matt were missing for teh last few chapters *hint hint* i'm expecting some taito/yamachi action. well i expect that of everything but that doesn't matter! MATT! TAI! WOOHOO! schem, sorry. great stuff ::dorkey thumbs up:: |
Reviewed By: Rei the Angel On: September 30, 2001 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry for sounding so stupid just before. I read your fic back at fanfiction.net. And personally, I want to find out which damn reader sent us here. Darcy_Superstar got an e-mail telling her 'bout thins place as did I. Find Darcy_Superstar on MediaMiner.org and get her e-mail. Mine is witcheemon@yahoo.com.au. When you have her e-mail send it to me. We'll try meet in a chatroom some time and discuss the matter. And by the way...WRITE SOME MORE! I LOVE this fic! |
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