"An Unexpected Ally" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: [me] Reviewed By: RavenX On: September 13, 2003 01:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: hey wheres? the next chapter? [jus jk] its a good story, keep up the good work ^^* |
Reviewed By: Dessy On: April 08, 2003 15:34 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You should continue I love this fic |