Reviewed By: Miko No Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Hiya! Okay, I'll admit first of being a Yohji/Aya fan, but I can't argue as long as my little redhead gets to be uke. This fic is wonderful in its own light, but kow what would spice it up a bit? Details! ('bout the clothing removal and touches and...stuff) Oh, and foreplay, foreplay is good...'specailly 'cause Ran wasn't in the mood at all. Tease him a bit, or maybe just give him a nice--okay, if I go on with that you're gonna have a fic in your review! Gomen! Good job though, good luck with your Ken/Aya group! |
