| "Broken Hopes" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: chibi moonstar On: March 25, 2004 22:21 CST
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I like your story so far so pleeeaaassee finish it.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 01:07 CST
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How incrediably special...You made this very confusing... Hate/love eh... Well I am kinda addicted... even with the poor grammar... so finish it... ........Confused yet!?
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Reviewed By: HyperMan On: January 01, 2004 00:34 CST
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Keep on keepin on.
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Reviewed By: Inu-San (Someone jocked it) On: December 20, 2003 04:55 CST
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niceness... TK... i can't imagine him like dat though.... kinda hard, instead, i imagine dis bulky, agile, guy hu's mean with skillz, but for love... hmm..
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Reviewed By: L33tfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty good, but I don't like how TK is. oh, well. can't change it now, huh!
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Reviewed By: Tetsu On: March 03, 2003 09:35 CST
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Interesting story, perhapps too short chapters? Or could be me just wanting to read more :)
/Tetsu |
Reviewed By: Android Fan 1817 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 16:09 CST
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Hi just posting in. nice new chappire but please dont go to fanfiction, its nice but they dont allow hentai so people have to disguise it as romance or even drop out those parts. You really need to use spell check and grammar check though. Please, with it your story would be much better |
Reviewed By: sup On: February 01, 2003 02:39 CST
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GO TO FANFICTION.net |
Reviewed By: shader On: January 30, 2003 16:17 CST
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not bad continue if you will it. |
