| "Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tasuki and Kouji are SOOOOOO romantic! I always knew Tasuki had it in him to be gentle!! And Kouji is ALWAYS cool!!! YOU MUST UPDATE!!!!! *begging eyes*
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Reviewed By: Ai Yuukan On: July 09, 2003 19:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh! Please tell me what happens next! Are you still writing? Kouji and Tasuki are so H-O-T in this story! Please continue! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: gummi bears On: May 04, 2003 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fic u *HAVE* to continue so update soon.
*gummi bears* |
Reviewed By: DayDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was GREAT! I give you a 5 star rate! CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Star of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do. I have a few items that you might want to take into consideration. I know no author is perfect but you should either watch what you type or have someone proof-read it. Your grammar is a bit rusty, but your spelling is very good. I like to read this kind of anime too because it helps me kinda cope with bad stuff in my life. If you wanna talk to me at a later date you can do one of two things. Either you can email me or if you have an instant messenger you can send me a message... I have AOL instant messenger and my name under that is Reika a bandit... Well I hope to see more of your fics out and I can help you with writing if you need it.
Star of Fire |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
Your story is good. I jusy have to mention on this chapter you left alot of words out to make the sentences make sense. It wasn't too bad cause I just added them if if needed be. I just thought I would tell ya. I am not trying to flame just a helpfuk hint. Please post the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first of all please please continue i'll die if u don't!! ok thats all ja!! |
Reviewed By: tasukilova On: February 09, 2003 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! chappy 4 was the same as chappy 3 well sorta! |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 17:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
I love the story please write a new chap soon. I love it. The endo f chapter 3 was chapter 4 just to let you know. |
Reviewed By: cuttie_blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i love it!!! please please i love it!! continue soon |
Reviewed By: icychic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great fic |
