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| "Hidden Love Hina" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Andrew Joshua Talon On: February 27, 2003 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
(sigh) Of all the authors to do it, you had to be the one, didn't you?
Mutsumi: (sweatdrop) Ara ara, forgive Talon-kun, Rob-kun. He dislikes Narusegawa-chan immensely, and frankly can't see she and Keitaro together, despite what Ken Akamatsu's written. It was a good lemon, though...
Talon: (grumble) Don't mind my grumbling, Rob. You're an awesome lemon writer, who has my respect. I'm just going to have to hit my head against the wall for a couple hours to try and dispel those images (shudder).
Mutsumi: Ara, poor Talon-kun... What could make you recover faster?
Talon: Well... If Robster writes two lemons involving ANYONE but Naru and Keitaro. Keitaro and you, for example.
Mutsumi: (blush) Ara ara, um...
Talon: (shrug) Hey, take it as a challenge, if you must, Robster, but it'd just clear my brain if you tried your hand at lemons involving Keitaro and someone OTHER than Naru, the frigid psycho bitch who takes an manga series, TV show, and OAV to confess her lukewarm "like" for our humble ronin.
Mutsumi: Ara ara... | Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote it, you finally wrote it! Great work as always Rob!
Steve | Reviewed By: Captain Gloval On: January 30, 2003 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic. I liked the idea and the timing placed into the story line. There should be more fics of this type that divert the story line to an alternate universe. Only problem with this type of fic is that they are never taken back into the rest of the world, to get the reactions of the other residents. Sooner or later they would find out and all h*ll would break loose.
Saw very few writting errors, a few sentences could have been reworded to sound better and flow better but not bad.
I look forward to seeing more from you. Not really into Digimon but I liked your Eva fic also.
Keep up the good work.
Captain Gloval
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