| "Hidden Love Hina" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faggot On: December 17, 2009 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I jerked off to this.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: killerman83ca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I have read your story and I found it quick good to read. I hope you get a chance to update soon.
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Reviewed By: Animecake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so good. I usually don't read love hina fanfics, but that one was really good. I never really saw the show and some of my friends read the manga but I don't. Keep up the good work and write more. I will try and read more of your excellent work. peace homie.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 01, 2005 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite good. Better then any others out there.
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Reviewed By: Yaisel On: July 12, 2004 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good...it feels kinda OOC for some of the characters, but you manage to keep Keitaro and Naru in character for the most part. Keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: Dark Heart On: July 09, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good. You captured their love for each other in a way that would make even Ken Akamatsu would never have thought of. Keep up the very good work.
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Reviewed By: Scar_Faced_Dude On: June 13, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii! ^_^ People rarely write lemons this sweet, and you write it well. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kk On: April 07, 2004 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good but I think you made Keriato a little too knowledgeble about sex. Otherwise I loved it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
u should a lil sequel to that...but thats a suggestion. GREAT JOB! |
Title: good work
Reviewed By: m335h73r On: September 20, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... i've been readin' yer stuff since the digidomain and tk's double date. As far as I know this is a great way to take a break from the digimon fics. I hope you do more love hina. it makes me happy! |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 06:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice and juicy. I must confess that I haven't read any of your Pokemon lemons but then I HATE pokemon with a will! This is good though. I've only just started watching Love Hina. |
Reviewed By: moomoo On: April 08, 2003 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Very nice I look forward to reading ur Digimon Fanfics and ur Eva Fanfics |
Reviewed By: StrypGia On: March 21, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Uses the long history of accidental encounters between them pretty well. Well worth the read. |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: March 20, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the coolest lemons I have ever had the honor of reading. It was very well thought out. But you need a part two. Something where the residents catch them in the end. that would be interesting! |
Reviewed By: darkrider852 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool man. your one of the great writers of anime. you have the ful potential to create your own anime. esugio.
-darkrider852 |
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