| "Hidden Love Hina" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 01, 2005 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite good. Better then any others out there.
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Reviewed By: Yaisel On: July 12, 2004 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good...it feels kinda OOC for some of the characters, but you manage to keep Keitaro and Naru in character for the most part. Keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: Dark Heart On: July 09, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good. You captured their love for each other in a way that would make even Ken Akamatsu would never have thought of. Keep up the very good work.
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Reviewed By: Scar_Faced_Dude On: June 13, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii! ^_^ People rarely write lemons this sweet, and you write it well. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kk On: April 07, 2004 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good but I think you made Keriato a little too knowledgeble about sex. Otherwise I loved it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
u should a lil sequel to that...but thats a suggestion. GREAT JOB! |
Title: good work
Reviewed By: m335h73r On: September 20, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... i've been readin' yer stuff since the digidomain and tk's double date. As far as I know this is a great way to take a break from the digimon fics. I hope you do more love hina. it makes me happy! |
Reviewed By: ssj trungeta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 06:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice and juicy. I must confess that I haven't read any of your Pokemon lemons but then I HATE pokemon with a will! This is good though. I've only just started watching Love Hina. |
Reviewed By: moomoo On: April 08, 2003 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Very nice I look forward to reading ur Digimon Fanfics and ur Eva Fanfics |
Reviewed By: StrypGia On: March 21, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Uses the long history of accidental encounters between them pretty well. Well worth the read. |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: March 20, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the coolest lemons I have ever had the honor of reading. It was very well thought out. But you need a part two. Something where the residents catch them in the end. that would be interesting! |
Reviewed By: darkrider852 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool man. your one of the great writers of anime. you have the ful potential to create your own anime. esugio.
-darkrider852 |
Reviewed By: Andrew Joshua Talon On: February 27, 2003 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
(sigh) Of all the authors to do it, you had to be the one, didn't you?
Mutsumi: (sweatdrop) Ara ara, forgive Talon-kun, Rob-kun. He dislikes Narusegawa-chan immensely, and frankly can't see she and Keitaro together, despite what Ken Akamatsu's written. It was a good lemon, though...
Talon: (grumble) Don't mind my grumbling, Rob. You're an awesome lemon writer, who has my respect. I'm just going to have to hit my head against the wall for a couple hours to try and dispel those images (shudder).
Mutsumi: Ara, poor Talon-kun... What could make you recover faster?
Talon: Well... If Robster writes two lemons involving ANYONE but Naru and Keitaro. Keitaro and you, for example.
Mutsumi: (blush) Ara ara, um...
Talon: (shrug) Hey, take it as a challenge, if you must, Robster, but it'd just clear my brain if you tried your hand at lemons involving Keitaro and someone OTHER than Naru, the frigid psycho bitch who takes an manga series, TV show, and OAV to confess her lukewarm "like" for our humble ronin.
Mutsumi: Ara ara... |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote it, you finally wrote it! Great work as always Rob!
Steve |
Reviewed By: Captain Gloval On: January 30, 2003 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic. I liked the idea and the timing placed into the story line. There should be more fics of this type that divert the story line to an alternate universe. Only problem with this type of fic is that they are never taken back into the rest of the world, to get the reactions of the other residents. Sooner or later they would find out and all h*ll would break loose.
Saw very few writting errors, a few sentences could have been reworded to sound better and flow better but not bad.
I look forward to seeing more from you. Not really into Digimon but I liked your Eva fic also.
Keep up the good work.
Captain Gloval
SDF-1 CO |
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