| "Slave Mongrel" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 06:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Ruby: i busted a bed one time.
Yami Ruby:( runs after the boys )
wait for me!!!!!!!!!
Ruby: oy, that girl......
Duke: hey it's the cleaning lady, do something about that table ok?
Yami Ruby: (fumes) Men!!!!
Ruby: smiles evily kisses her dark
Yami Ruby: (gasps) you get the blindfold, i'll get the syup and i'll meet ya in duke tub in5 mins?
Duke: dont you dare!!!
...oh joey...
Ruby and Yami Ruby run off |
Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: February 22, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic. I hope there's more to come. It's a different pairing and I think it's great. |
Reviewed By: Balis On: February 11, 2003 18:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Great! Just super! ::claps:: ^_^ Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: January 31, 2003 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
=D *dance dance* Yay! More Otogi fanfiction. ^___^ Nice ficceh! |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: January 30, 2003 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ruby:sweet fun sexxy...
Yami Ruby gets into the tub with joey and duke
Joey : who are you?
Yami Ruby:ummm the cleaning lady?
Duke: then you clean the floor and we will go fuck again!!! (they run off to duke's romm)
Ruby gets in the tub with her Yami...
Ruby:men....
Yami Ruby: that's it i'm dateing mia...
Ruby: maybe when you get your OWN body...
but anyway i loved this fic your very good |
Reviewed By: Ashley On: March 16, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^!!! I've seen so few Otogi/Jou fics, and you made me even more happy with the Oto/Jou/Seto lemon!!! THANK YOU!!!!! ^-^!!
There were only a few spelling mistakes, but it wasn't at all bad overall.
Marik: Urusai. You like anything with Jou getting screwed out of his mind..u.u;
Malik: I agree with my Yami on this.
*Growls* Bad tigers! Go away!
Marik & Malik: *Both blondes are suddenly hybrid tigers.* O.O;; HELP!!!!
Awww...Aren't they cute?? Bai bai! ^-^ |
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