| "Slave Mongrel" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Hoorah!!
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
*looks at title* hoorah? *shrugs* ah well... my fingers type without me. Yay! Good story!! Poor Joey. Yay! Count D!! I must say that Duke/Seto/Joey is an interesting pairing... o_O
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Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover (aka M.C.) On: November 08, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
No! Where is my Yugi lemon? You can write threesomes like a crazed horny bitch, but no Yugi lemon? That is wrong! Okay it was a good guess anyway right, about Leon? I ASSUME since I haven't actually seen the show, your saying Leon is from Pet Shop of Horror's right? About that Joey lemon, are you sure like a day or two after getting raped he would want nookie? I don'no but its another lemon for me! Yugi Lemon!
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Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked the first six chapter's then you went sadistic on me.Funny thing is...I've actually thought of something worst then chapter eight,even more then Bakura,I think I play too many horror games.I liked how you added in Leon.The funny thing is the first story I ever wrote(never posted or finished)I had the Resident Evil hottie in it too,Nice going! |
Reviewed By: ~Celina~ On: April 14, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! this is my fave story of all time!!! Soooooo good!! you need to do a Bakura/Ryou/Tristen chppy though, but still insanly amusing!!!! ^o^ |
Reviewed By: vegetakaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
there arent enough yuri fics out there...i'm sick of yaoi, its totally wrong DOWN WITH YAOI! |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: April 07, 2003 05:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ruby: dear loki...(fans herslef) i just had cybersexx then read this....
Yami Ruby: so she's high on boys!
Ruby: oh...ya...i am
Yami Ruby : and now our fave thing of all seto is getting it on too!!!! (bites seto's nipples....again)
Seto: eeeepppp!
Ruby: (smug) my bf's cuter....
Duke, Seto, Joey, and Yami Ruby: HEY!
Yami Ruby and the boys run off to the bedroom.
Ruby:....
Ruby: just wanted to say thanks for thanking me...and next time use the spell checker love |
Reviewed By: Rabid yaoi fangirl #2 On: April 03, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWSOME! one of my all time fave fics ^.^ I love the part about Yami in the lifeboat, horribly random! good job!! feel free to write more and more and more!
Kaiba/Duke/Joey: as long as we're left out of it -.-;
Me: NEVA!!! XD |
Reviewed By: Jenny-fer On: March 31, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Jenny-fer: *munches on lemon* Awesome!! ^^
Kristen: I thought that it was over after the first chapter! Tis awesome that its wasn't!! ^__^
Jenny-fer: lol I was wondering what would happen if these two would meet! ^^ *notices a pink blurr* SHIRONAMI!! COME BACK WITH THOSE COOKIES!!! XO
ShiroNami: ^^ *munches on cookies* Feel free to write more!! ^^ *waves as she runs away from cookie-deprived Jenny-fer* |
Reviewed By: Amy On: March 18, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!! you are my new god!!!!!!! you have just taken all my dreams and made them come true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D thank you thank you so so much!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zara the Pirate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 03:46 CST
Comment/Review:
::cackles:: Absofuckinglutey love this! XD I've been looking for a fic like this, ::cackles again:: Ahh, very good, I love the random inserts from you but my only beef is that you need a beta reader or something. o_O;
::cackles:: Have a parrot! ::hands her a wombat:: |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: March 15, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I think... I think... I think I love you. XD *howls* Seto/Jou and Otogi/Jou! Woo! That was some good smut. o.O *nodnod* SANKYU! |
Reviewed By: Pickle in a jar! On: March 15, 2003 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Baby, this is by far the best fic I've seen on this here site and I'd take it as a peronal insult if you didn't continue as soon as possible!
You have a pretty good talent and I await the next amazing chapter that you will spin!
Lots 'o' luv and cookies!
Pickle in a jar! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohhh! Lemony goodness! Don't you dare stop there!! |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:53 CST
Comment/Review:
=^_^=more!!!!!!!!!!1you is good author
lilly:oh aint you cute talking all babyish
me:im cute?really?!cool!!!!1 love being a fox demon
lilly:*pets you on head*please write more soon
both:byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: nikkei On: February 25, 2003 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hunter (yami): yayyayyay,thestorywasgreat!!! continue...moremoremore!!!
nikkei: *sigh* god, she's so tiring. -_-
*mumbles* but anyways for once she's right
yami: *glares*
nikkei: the story is great please continue.
yami: yeahyeahyeah
nikkei: please excuse her she's sugar high
yami: woohoo!!! *starts running in circles*
nikkei: i'm dizzy o.o |
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