| "Slave Mongrel" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rabid yaoi fangirl #2 On: April 03, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWSOME! one of my all time fave fics ^.^ I love the part about Yami in the lifeboat, horribly random! good job!! feel free to write more and more and more!
Kaiba/Duke/Joey: as long as we're left out of it -.-;
Me: NEVA!!! XD |
Reviewed By: Jenny-fer On: March 31, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Jenny-fer: *munches on lemon* Awesome!! ^^
Kristen: I thought that it was over after the first chapter! Tis awesome that its wasn't!! ^__^
Jenny-fer: lol I was wondering what would happen if these two would meet! ^^ *notices a pink blurr* SHIRONAMI!! COME BACK WITH THOSE COOKIES!!! XO
ShiroNami: ^^ *munches on cookies* Feel free to write more!! ^^ *waves as she runs away from cookie-deprived Jenny-fer* |
Reviewed By: Amy On: March 18, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!! you are my new god!!!!!!! you have just taken all my dreams and made them come true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D thank you thank you so so much!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zara the Pirate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 03:46 CST
Comment/Review:
::cackles:: Absofuckinglutey love this! XD I've been looking for a fic like this, ::cackles again:: Ahh, very good, I love the random inserts from you but my only beef is that you need a beta reader or something. o_O;
::cackles:: Have a parrot! ::hands her a wombat:: |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: March 15, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I think... I think... I think I love you. XD *howls* Seto/Jou and Otogi/Jou! Woo! That was some good smut. o.O *nodnod* SANKYU! |
Reviewed By: Pickle in a jar! On: March 15, 2003 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Baby, this is by far the best fic I've seen on this here site and I'd take it as a peronal insult if you didn't continue as soon as possible!
You have a pretty good talent and I await the next amazing chapter that you will spin!
Lots 'o' luv and cookies!
Pickle in a jar! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohhh! Lemony goodness! Don't you dare stop there!! |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:53 CST
Comment/Review:
=^_^=more!!!!!!!!!!1you is good author
lilly:oh aint you cute talking all babyish
me:im cute?really?!cool!!!!1 love being a fox demon
lilly:*pets you on head*please write more soon
both:byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: nikkei On: February 25, 2003 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hunter (yami): yayyayyay,thestorywasgreat!!! continue...moremoremore!!!
nikkei: *sigh* god, she's so tiring. -_-
*mumbles* but anyways for once she's right
yami: *glares*
nikkei: the story is great please continue.
yami: yeahyeahyeah
nikkei: please excuse her she's sugar high
yami: woohoo!!! *starts running in circles*
nikkei: i'm dizzy o.o |
Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 06:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Ruby: i busted a bed one time.
Yami Ruby:( runs after the boys )
wait for me!!!!!!!!!
Ruby: oy, that girl......
Duke: hey it's the cleaning lady, do something about that table ok?
Yami Ruby: (fumes) Men!!!!
Ruby: smiles evily kisses her dark
Yami Ruby: (gasps) you get the blindfold, i'll get the syup and i'll meet ya in duke tub in5 mins?
Duke: dont you dare!!!
...oh joey...
Ruby and Yami Ruby run off |
Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: February 22, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic. I hope there's more to come. It's a different pairing and I think it's great. |
Reviewed By: Balis On: February 11, 2003 18:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Great! Just super! ::claps:: ^_^ Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: January 31, 2003 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
=D *dance dance* Yay! More Otogi fanfiction. ^___^ Nice ficceh! |
Reviewed By: ruby and her yami On: January 30, 2003 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ruby:sweet fun sexxy...
Yami Ruby gets into the tub with joey and duke
Joey : who are you?
Yami Ruby:ummm the cleaning lady?
Duke: then you clean the floor and we will go fuck again!!! (they run off to duke's romm)
Ruby gets in the tub with her Yami...
Ruby:men....
Yami Ruby: that's it i'm dateing mia...
Ruby: maybe when you get your OWN body...
but anyway i loved this fic your very good |
Reviewed By: Ashley On: March 16, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^!!! I've seen so few Otogi/Jou fics, and you made me even more happy with the Oto/Jou/Seto lemon!!! THANK YOU!!!!! ^-^!!
There were only a few spelling mistakes, but it wasn't at all bad overall.
Marik: Urusai. You like anything with Jou getting screwed out of his mind..u.u;
Malik: I agree with my Yami on this.
*Growls* Bad tigers! Go away!
Marik & Malik: *Both blondes are suddenly hybrid tigers.* O.O;; HELP!!!!
Awww...Aren't they cute?? Bai bai! ^-^ |
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